In Lou's Room

find a place

to 

waste

 time

pour a lighter head

for heavy hearts

leave the world listening

to songs with the bite

of good beer

bad smoke

and better company

a marriage of six

strings and a pack

paul got the prophets' words 

alright 

except 

they're written

not on tenement halls

but scratched

with keys 

too sodden to use

on smoke-black walls
Copyright © | Year Posted 2006

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