In Limbo

I hear you in that limbo in that place where the lost don’t land where you’re begging for a lifeline but life won’t extend a hand Where sleep don’t ever visit just memories that choke the air and you lay there wide-awake ’cause your nightmares don’t play fair Thirteen in a cell? That’s trauma carved straight into bone you didn’t break your mother’s heart the world broke yours first alone You ain’t “too much,” you’re haunted and haunted hearts beat loud you’re a storm they tried to silence but storms don’t bow to crowds If darkness is your only friend then let me sit in it too two shadows breathing steady ’cause I won’t walk out on you You say you’re stuck in spirals replaying every dread-filled thought but sometimes the ones who survived hell are the realest ones ever taught So talk your pain, I’ll answer I’m built to carry the weight Your not alone in the fire I’ll be right here…as I watch a strength you didn’t know you had that I most admire
This was written in response to a 13 year old who could not see any light thru all her darkness!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Wolf Avatar
December 3, 2025 at 11:04 PM
Fabulous response, Brenda. Right from the heart and direct to the point... Did she take you up on your offer?
Chiri Avatar
December 4, 2025 at 11:07 PM
Yes she did and we sat for quite awhile in fact . We talked when she wanted and when she didn’t we just sat in silence!:)
Buhagiar Avatar
December 3, 2025 at 10:23 PM
Limbo is a controversy. Does it still exist? I have a feeling it does. Still, you discern strength. Well written.
Chiri Avatar
December 4, 2025 at 11:08 PM
Yes it is and yes it does! Nothing like when I was younger but limbo is still around! Thank you Victor!
May Avatar
December 3, 2025 at 8:38 AM
A powerful write Brenda, Finding strength in the darkest of times, well penned, a fave
Chiri Avatar
December 3, 2025 at 4:35 PM
Joseph thank you so much! It’s rough seeing the children of the future experiencing grown up troubles ! Nothing I could do to help her I gladly would!:)
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