In Liberal Land

In liberal land the poppies grow
Though not too long for soon they're smoked
How else can they maintain a belief
That's mired in fantasy and grief

They have consistency of mind
Their brains malfunction all the time
But don't let politics revolt
Inside they house a heart of cold

Their way of thinking was set forth
In a fairy tale of yore
Where nothing was as it appeared
And playing cards could speak and hear

They've dwelled inside that rabbit hole
Since long before Frank's polio
Where common sense is a disease
And all that counts is feeling pleased

With how they've been so kind and bold
In carving life from helpless souls
Who none the wiser cast their votes
For shamans dressed in phony hope

It took a child to bare the king
For none dare speak while witnessing
The simple truth before their eyes
Their brains whitewashed through guile and lies

They seized the schools, the bench, the arts
Upturned the vendor's applecart
Til none were left to pay the rent
Totalitarian government
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Parsons Avatar
May 27, 2014 at 6:27 AM
"Who none the wiser cast their votes For shamans dressed if phony hope" It's crazy how so many people don't see the corruption. Ignorance is bliss, but not for everyone .... Great poem, dude.
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December 30, 2013 at 1:58 PM
Ben, Hope you are enjoying the holidays, Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers, This is deep!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT
Torres Avatar
December 27, 2013 at 12:47 PM
WElcome to PSoup, BEN.. Keep penning 'til we reached the change in ou world today..This is the best place TO SPEAK YOUR MIND..and world will listen on U.. ^_6
Burton Avatar
December 30, 2013 at 9:52 AM
Thanks, AiyaH. Will do!
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December 27, 2013 at 11:55 AM
much going on with the world today, Ben, , A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
Burton Avatar
December 30, 2013 at 9:55 AM
Thanks for the lovely welcome, Linda. I will take a look at your contest, post haste!
Andresen Avatar
December 27, 2013 at 11:04 AM
- Welcome to P-Soup, Ben ! - Nice to read your first poem here. :)) - Hope you will have much pleasure to be with us. - Wishing you good luck - have a nice day! - (Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours). - My first greeting to you from Norway. - I will come back to read more .... another day :) - All the best for the year 2014 ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Burton Avatar
December 30, 2013 at 9:57 AM
Best regards and thanks, Anna-Lise. I have little computer time, as I only get access while working, but I will try to respond to everyone, and offer comments to anyone who does the same. Happy New Year! :)
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December 27, 2013 at 10:02 AM
Warm welcome ,dear friend...a poem of great commitment...go on..
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