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In Legion

in legion of hues sun falling behind the ridge ~ drawing final breath AP: 3rd place 2020 Posted on May 30, 2019

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Date: 6/4/2019 4:32:00 PM

Image of images: Nailed precisely, Line. Great Haiku! :) gw

Line Gauthier
Date: 6/4/2019 5:00:00 PM

Thanks, Gershon. Much appreciated.

Date: 5/31/2019 1:48:00 AM

I enjoyed this lovely image... wonderfully worded, my friend! ;)

Line Gauthier
Date: 5/31/2019 5:09:00 AM

Thank you so much, Rhona. Most appreciated.

Date: 5/30/2019 10:32:00 PM

In which the eye can see far far better than anycamera

Line Gauthier
Date: 5/30/2019 10:34:00 PM

So true that no camera can really capture how majestic a sunset really is. Being in the moment is part of the magic.

Date: 5/30/2019 7:15:00 PM

Nice one, Line. The last part seemed like death for me. Or maybe it was personifcation of the sun dying!

Line Gauthier
Date: 5/30/2019 10:28:00 PM

Yes, Andrea, the death of the sun... for that day.

Date: 5/30/2019 6:30:00 PM

A picturesque view for limited minds to behold Line, Aloha William

Line Gauthier
Date: 5/30/2019 10:31:00 PM

I bet there are a few spectacular sunset now and then in Hawaii !! LOL

Date: 5/30/2019 4:36:00 PM

A beautiful scene; great Haiku!

Line Gauthier
Date: 5/30/2019 10:28:00 PM

Thanks, ML. Much appreciated.

Date: 5/30/2019 3:17:00 PM

A beauty!

Line Gauthier
Date: 5/30/2019 10:29:00 PM

Thanks, Kim. Most appreciated.

Date: 5/30/2019 1:10:00 PM

Stunning image Line, saw that many times last week. Tom.

Tom Cunningham
Date: 5/31/2019 2:31:00 AM

Thanks Line it was spectacular, the mountains , sunrises and sunsets and of course the beach

Line Gauthier
Date: 5/30/2019 10:29:00 PM

Hope you had a marvelous trip to the Mediterranean, Tom. How could it not be spectacular!