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In Legion

in legion of hues
sun falling behind the ridge
~ drawing final breath



AP:  3rd place 2020

appreciationbeautifulcolordeathsunsethaiku

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Gershon Wolf

June 4, 2019 at 4:32 PM

Image of images: Nailed precisely, Line. Great Haiku! :) gw

Line Gauthier

June 4, 2019 at 5:00 PM

Thanks, Gershon. Much appreciated.

Rhona Mcferran

May 31, 2019 at 1:48 AM

I enjoyed this lovely image... wonderfully worded, my friend! ;)

Line Gauthier

May 31, 2019 at 5:09 AM

Thank you so much, Rhona. Most appreciated.

Timothy Mcguire

May 30, 2019 at 10:32 PM

In which the eye can see far far better than anycamera

Line Gauthier

May 30, 2019 at 10:34 PM

So true that no camera can really capture how majestic a sunset really is. Being in the moment is part of the magic.

Andrea Dietrich

May 30, 2019 at 7:15 PM

Nice one, Line. The last part seemed like death for me. Or maybe it was personifcation of the sun dying!

Line Gauthier

May 30, 2019 at 10:28 PM

Yes, Andrea, the death of the sun... for that day.

William Kelii Kekaula

May 30, 2019 at 6:30 PM

A picturesque view for limited minds to behold Line, Aloha William

Line Gauthier

May 30, 2019 at 10:31 PM

I bet there are a few spectacular sunset now and then in Hawaii !! LOL

M. L. Kiser

May 30, 2019 at 4:36 PM

A beautiful scene; great Haiku!

Line Gauthier

May 30, 2019 at 10:28 PM

Thanks, ML. Much appreciated.

Kim Rodrigues

May 30, 2019 at 3:17 PM

A beauty!

Line Gauthier

May 30, 2019 at 10:29 PM

Thanks, Kim. Most appreciated.

Tom Cunningham

May 30, 2019 at 1:10 PM

Stunning image Line, saw that many times last week. Tom.

Tom Cunningham

May 31, 2019 at 2:31 AM

Thanks Line it was spectacular, the mountains , sunrises and sunsets and of course the beach

Line Gauthier

May 30, 2019 at 10:29 PM

Hope you had a marvelous trip to the Mediterranean, Tom. How could it not be spectacular!

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