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#5 on Best 100 New Poems List June 22, 2025

In June

daisies in bright skirts -
bees in yellow jackets 
come courting
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Canerdy Avatar
July 18, 2025 at 9:00 AM
Effective use of personification, Andrea! CONGRATS on your win. Janice
Guptar Avatar
July 18, 2025 at 7:59 AM
Belated congratulations dear poetess on your win in this contest, with a lovely Haiku. I don`t recall having seen this one. Sending you blessings of light.
Kendrick Avatar
June 22, 2025 at 3:53 AM
Back with congratulations on your winner. Way to go. Sara K
Etgen-Baker Avatar
June 21, 2025 at 4:30 PM
a captivating and engaging Haiku.
Hind Avatar
June 21, 2025 at 12:26 PM
Wow. Love this soooo much! Congrats on your win! <3
Dietrich Avatar
June 21, 2025 at 1:42 PM
Thanks so much. It was one of my personal favorites this month of my haiku
Rodrigues Avatar
June 21, 2025 at 5:52 AM
So cute! Congrats!
James Avatar
June 20, 2025 at 12:15 PM
A perfect match. Congrats on your win. Emilia : )
Canerdy Avatar
June 20, 2025 at 7:02 AM
Andrea, CONGRATS on your win with this creative, fun piece! Janice
Mohn Avatar
June 18, 2025 at 7:19 PM
wow...this is great Andrea :)
Mckeithan Avatar
June 18, 2025 at 5:47 PM
Excellent Hiku Andrea. Great pairing of the bees and daisies
Kendrick Avatar
June 18, 2025 at 5:13 PM
Whoa!! Even the bees and daisies are in love. I like this one. Sara K
Lawless Avatar
June 18, 2025 at 5:05 PM
LMAF at this Andrea, it is just so right on...humor and word play in a Haiku
Wolf Avatar
June 18, 2025 at 3:31 PM
Wonderful image. Let's hope for a June wedding.
Goldsmith Avatar
June 18, 2025 at 1:54 PM
What a creative/fun/cute write you have here. Love It..... Have a lovely/fun day writing away.....
Alhemaidy Avatar
June 18, 2025 at 1:09 PM
What a lovely haiku! A favorite :-)
Anaya Avatar
June 18, 2025 at 10:26 AM
Love, love, love! Dressed for love ~xhugs
Allison Avatar
June 18, 2025 at 9:24 AM
absolutely delightful, thanks for the smiles - wonderful personification too! a little gem, into my faves! hugs jan xx
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