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In Honour of a Great Life

I thought of her smile, her love, her life, many lovely moments in the past, a great mother and devoted wife, when she breathed her last. many a purpose her life avail, many a role and many a cast, her feats in life had carved a long trail, when she breathed her last. Never a moment to stop or rest, Never her life zeal would fly half mast, she gave family her very best, till she breathed her last. what praise or glory can one bestow, on a mother’s kingdom timeless vast, we bow in her honour as tears flow, she has breathed her last! 2nd placement Mother poetry contest Constance La France Written 08/Feb /2021 In honour of my mother who will live on in hearts. 9,9,9,5 syllables Sponsor Constance La France Mother poetry contest old or new poems

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Date: 3/31/2021 8:21:00 AM
Krish, congratulations on your win in my Mother Challenge, wonderfully penned, well done _Constance
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 3/31/2021 8:44:00 AM
Thanks Constance! yes, an emotional moment! heart breaking! Thanks for my placement!
Date: 3/31/2021 5:25:00 AM
A beautiful tribute to your mother, Krish. Your poem touches my heart as I remember my mother, and ponder about her memories. Congratulations on your win. BW ~ Mala
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 3/31/2021 5:45:00 AM
Thanks Mala! Mother’s loss is still hurtful and will take a lifetime to heal!! I am sure you have similar thoughts and feelings about your loss.
Date: 2/9/2021 8:00:00 PM
A wonderful tribute to your mother. Infact all mother's. Every line deep meaningful. This one brought tears in my eyes. I could feel your pain.
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 2/9/2021 11:07:00 PM
Thanks Rama. I had tears when I wrote! It is for all mothers.
Date: 2/9/2021 10:29:00 AM
A beautiful tribute to your Mother Krish, again my condolences to you and your family. Tom
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 2/9/2021 12:03:00 PM
Time should heal slowly but it looks hard at the moment. Thanks Tom for all the kind words of support.

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