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In His Truck

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He rides in his truck; she works in the field. In his truck, he's king of the long road Time doesn't stand still, in the truck time flowed Early morn out in the garden, she kneeled Nature and God to her each day was revealed When life got stressed, problems solved at crossroads He rides in his truck She gathered the food, prepared the large yield Cooked their meals, preserved, froze, pickled boatload She's now home, not in the field, time has slowed Time for him is sealed, as he keeps his eyes peeled He rides in his truck.

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Valsa George

Date: 10/16/2022 7:12:00 PM

Love this family consisting of a hardworking husband and wife. They don't have too many aspirations, but find joy in the fulfillment of their simple daily pursuits and lead a happy life. Now life has naturally slowed for them with age. Beautifully written, Sara.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 10/17/2022 4:22:00 AM

Valsa, Yes, there are many in our world who live a simple life but do or have had aspirations. However, life's demands keep them from ever fulfilling their dreams. Dreams are good even if they never become real. Your comments are spot on. Thanks for adding your interpretation to my comments. Sara

Bj Legros Kelley

Date: 10/16/2022 5:55:00 PM

Sara, your poem is so beautiful, about such a strong hardworking man, the glimpse back through time and though aging, still alert. My dad had a truck, I purchased it a few years ago, it was one of his prized possessions. This poem resonated with me, I love it so much!

Sara Kendrick
Date: 10/17/2022 4:14:00 AM

I enjoyed reading your interpretation of this poem. Yes, so many men do love their truck which is their spot of belonging. Your visit has added a touch of warmth and understanding to my page. Sara

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 10/16/2022 10:26:00 AM

Brilliant rondine. Very enjoyable. Hope you'll read my latest poem.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 10/16/2022 11:55:00 AM

They are not so easy to write. Your visit, Victor is wonderful. Sara

Sotto Poet

Date: 10/16/2022 8:54:00 AM

Your reflections were quite enjoyable to read. Your wonderful visuals coupled with your one-of-a-kind lexicon have shown an additional layer of heaven-sent beauty. Brilliant Rondine writing that really captures the spirit of your poem.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 10/16/2022 11:53:00 AM

Thank you, Lasaad. I appreciate the kind review of my work. I liked that snapshot as well. Age brings its disabilities. Your visit is spectacular. Sara

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/16/2022 8:37:00 AM

Looks like all he can do is ride in the truck. At least he is there for emotional support, but I would just ask to stay home and watch tv!! She is doing all the work and that's sad to me but seems to be what happens when one partner is disabled with time.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 10/16/2022 11:51:00 AM

Yep!! You have him figured out. LOL..Time changes all things. Thanks for dropping by. Sara

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/16/2022 8:35:00 AM

thanks for my win for your anniversary, Sara. I hope you keep going strong. Let me read this poem now.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 10/16/2022 11:50:00 AM

Your poem was very personal, and it had a special place. Thanks for sharing it and for dropping by here. Sara