In Him

morning erupting a darkened sky, hanging shadows from gallows poles. dancing ribbons becoming light, closed eyes, orange, red, yellow. nature’s chorus sings of heaven’s gates, warmth above In Him grace.

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Ernilando Tugaff

Date: 8/1/2009 10:48:00 AM

Very inspiring and uplifting poetry. I love it. Congratulations and God bless. Ernilando

James Fraser

Date: 7/28/2009 2:59:00 AM

Congratulations on your poem being featured>>James

Nicole Sharon Brown

Date: 7/27/2009 12:40:00 PM

God is good, the simple things that God has given unnoticed because we are often little ungrateful children, Thank God for you writing this, and thank you, Congrats on the well-penned feature.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/27/2009 9:26:00 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Jason. Love, Carol

Diane Christian

Date: 7/27/2009 8:10:00 AM

A powerful write, God's Grace is just so amazing, he just pours it upon us each and every day if we look around we can see God's Grace everywhere,, congratulations on your featured poem, God bless you from diane

Jessica Arteaga

Date: 7/27/2009 12:09:00 AM

i love how you put when we close our eyes we see those colors which we do! great write.

Date: 7/26/2009 6:11:00 PM

Just wanted to drop by and add congratulations on having your poem featured to my other comment. Enjoy your honor. Wishing you continued success. Karen

Abe Lopez

Date: 4/25/2009 9:46:00 AM

the visuals in this write are wonderful . thank you for your kind thoughts....alopez

Keith Bickerstaffe

Date: 12/13/2008 9:08:00 PM

'...orange, red, yellow' offsetting 'the darkened sky' and your ultimately redemptive ending are very effective. A pleasing flow, not easy within the confines of the NONET form. Well done Jason. Keith

Date: 12/12/2008 5:14:00 PM

Nice use of imagery to forward this faith message. Blessings to you for sharing it. A belated welcome to Poetry Soup!! I hope you enjoy your time spent with us. Best wishes with your writing. Karen

Jesu Johnson

Date: 11/22/2008 11:16:00 PM

I like this poem alot. It is very vivid in it's description.