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In Him

morning erupting a darkened sky,
hanging shadows from gallows poles.
dancing ribbons becoming light,
closed eyes, orange, red, yellow.
nature’s chorus sings
of heaven’s gates,
warmth above
In Him
grace.

Copyright © Jason Johnson | Year Posted 2008

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Ernilando Tugaff Date: 8/1/2009 10:48:00 AM Very inspiring and uplifting poetry. I love it. Congratulations and God bless. Ernilando Login to Reply

James Fraser Date: 7/28/2009 2:59:00 AM Congratulations on your poem being featured>>James Login to Reply

Nicole Sharon Brown Date: 7/27/2009 12:40:00 PM God is good, the simple things that God has given unnoticed because we are often little ungrateful children, Thank God for you writing this, and thank you, Congrats on the well-penned feature. Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 7/27/2009 9:26:00 AM Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Jason. Love, Carol Login to Reply

Diane Christian Date: 7/27/2009 8:10:00 AM A powerful write, God's Grace is just so amazing, he just pours it upon us each and every day if we look around we can see God's Grace everywhere,, congratulations on your featured poem, God bless you from diane Login to Reply

Jessica Arteaga Date: 7/27/2009 12:09:00 AM i love how you put when we close our eyes we see those colors which we do! great write. Login to Reply

Date: 7/26/2009 6:11:00 PM Just wanted to drop by and add congratulations on having your poem featured to my other comment. Enjoy your honor. Wishing you continued success. Karen Login to Reply

Abe Lopez Date: 4/25/2009 9:46:00 AM the visuals in this write are wonderful . thank you for your kind thoughts....alopez Login to Reply

Keith Bickerstaffe Date: 12/13/2008 9:08:00 PM '...orange, red, yellow' offsetting 'the darkened sky' and your ultimately redemptive ending are very effective. A pleasing flow, not easy within the confines of the NONET form. Well done Jason. Keith Login to Reply

Date: 12/12/2008 5:14:00 PM Nice use of imagery to forward this faith message. Blessings to you for sharing it. A belated welcome to Poetry Soup!! I hope you enjoy your time spent with us. Best wishes with your writing. Karen Login to Reply

Jesu Johnson Date: 11/22/2008 11:16:00 PM I like this poem alot. It is very vivid in it's description. Login to Reply