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In Her Teen

We know her future could be bright
If not for death that snatched her dream
She was the queen among her mates
The few she left here said it all

If not for death that snatched her dream
While on earth she nurtured the best
The few she left here said it all
A jewel worth many to pens

While on earth she nurtured the best
She was the queen of her mates
The few she left here said it all
We know her future could be bright

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Date: 6/2/2013 2:27:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your great winning work this afternoon..Congrats on your great win..Sara
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Date: 6/1/2013 3:47:00 AM
hi and congrats A O , well done xx
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Date: 5/31/2013 8:25:00 PM
Abdulhafeez, wonderful poem of loss for one of your friends, when people die young it is really sad, my condolences. Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 5/31/2013 6:23:00 PM
congrats on your win with this great pantoum AO
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Date: 5/18/2013 7:21:00 PM
This is marvelous, I really appreciate the artistry of this piece.
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Date: 5/17/2013 10:17:00 PM
A great contender for the Dying Young contest... the first two lines are just heartbreaking. COULD be bright... but no longer. Beautiful, but tragic...
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Date: 5/17/2013 11:42:00 AM
- A beautiful poem, but so sad ..... so sad A.O. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Abdulhafeez Oyewole
Date: 5/17/2013 12:02:00 PM
It is Anne-Lise. Thanks for visiting.