Afolabi Muideen Poet Romanticism

In Her My Love Dwells

Her eye balls gleam as bright night light
Her brow hairs, blinking black as ackee seed
Sag upon themselves
And the two curve as crescent of half moon
I mesmerize whenever she grins
And I wonder, are these teeth or diamonds?
And an utterance from her
Makes me fall into a trance
And as it chimes in my hearing
And I vend her name within a million times
And I think it never halt
And I become a child
Savouring the company of a toy
Her prettiness, her look
I wonder her ilk.

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Robert Lindley June 15, 2016 at 8:58 PM You have found your gem my friend.. Now be sure to embrace and love it true..A7

Kelly Deschler April 28, 2016 at 2:08 PM A lovely dedication painted with heartfelt descriptions of her... Nicely done, A.M.!

Manmath Dalei April 11, 2016 at 4:52 PM Hi AM, What a beautiful write. It's truly impressive. 7 from me. ...........hugs Afolabi Muideen April 12, 2016 at 4:02 PM Thanks for dropping by to read and commenting to my lovely gem. Blessings!

Constance La France April 11, 2016 at 2:04 PM AM, a lovely romantic write, lucky Fareedah to be loved so much, 7 ~ Afolabi Muideen April 12, 2016 at 3:59 PM Um! Lucky, lucky, lucky. She is lucky as you said. Thanks for commenting Broken Wings.

Sara Kendrick April 11, 2016 at 11:24 AM Ahh!!! How expressive and romantic about the one you love..Thanks for stopping by your support in reading and commenting on my work is encouraging..Sara Afolabi Muideen April 12, 2016 at 3:51 PM Thanks for the pretty, excellent comment.......... Much love.

Anne-Lise Andresen April 11, 2016 at 10:49 AM - Beautiful to your beloved Fareedah - She's certainly proud of you, Afolabi - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Afolabi Muideen April 12, 2016 at 3:46 PM Lol! Thanks to poetrysoup. I also proud of her

Andrea Dietrich April 10, 2016 at 8:49 PM Your love for her shines in this poem. Fareedah is a lucky lady. Afolabi Muideen April 12, 2016 at 3:41 PM Thanks for dropping and commenting Ma, I love her a lot. Lol!

Anand Parmale April 10, 2016 at 8:06 PM This is so romantic and so beautiful AM....I am feeling like falling in love again....You made my morning so romantic....Awesome awesome.... Afolabi Muideen April 12, 2016 at 3:39 PM Lol! Thanks for the pleasant comment friend.

Jan Allison April 10, 2016 at 12:28 PM oh such a lovely tribute she sounds so lovely Afolabi:-) hugs Jan xx Afolabi Muideen April 10, 2016 at 12:44 PM Yes of cause, she is elegant and pleasant. I at-time wonder of her beauty, God really made her on friday. Thanks for the lovely comment. Much love!

Tim Smith April 10, 2016 at 12:27 PM So beautiful to have a love like that A. M., you should be smiling as well her when she reads : ) Afolabi Muideen April 10, 2016 at 12:39 PM I hope she loves this gem. Thanks for the support.

Paul Callus April 10, 2016 at 7:59 AM Lovely and romantic, Afolabi; your Fareedah must be a really special lady! ~ All the best // paul Afolabi Muideen April 10, 2016 at 10:26 AM Yea, she is. I appreciate your support.