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In her my Love Dwells

Her eye balls gleam as bright night light Her brow hairs, blinking black as ackee seed Sag upon themselves And the two curve as crescent of half moon I mesmerize whenever she grins And I wonder, are these teeth or diamonds? And an utterance from her Makes me fall into a trance And as it chimes in my hearing And I vend her name within a million times And I think it never halt And I become a child Savouring the company of a toy Her prettiness, her look I wonder her ilk.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 6/15/2016 8:58:00 PM
You have found your gem my friend.. Now be sure to embrace and love it true..A7
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Date: 4/28/2016 2:08:00 PM
A lovely dedication painted with heartfelt descriptions of her... Nicely done, A.M.!
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Date: 4/11/2016 4:52:00 PM
Hi AM, What a beautiful write. It's truly impressive. 7 from me. ...........hugs
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Afolabi Muideen
Date: 4/12/2016 4:02:00 PM
Thanks for dropping by to read and commenting to my lovely gem. Blessings!
Date: 4/11/2016 2:04:00 PM
AM, a lovely romantic write, lucky Fareedah to be loved so much, 7 ~
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Date: 4/12/2016 3:59:00 PM
Um! Lucky, lucky, lucky. She is lucky as you said. Thanks for commenting Broken Wings.
Date: 4/11/2016 11:24:00 AM
Ahh!!! How expressive and romantic about the one you love..Thanks for stopping by your support in reading and commenting on my work is encouraging..Sara
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Afolabi Muideen
Date: 4/12/2016 3:51:00 PM
Thanks for the pretty, excellent comment.......... Much love.
Date: 4/11/2016 10:49:00 AM
- Beautiful to your beloved Fareedah - She's certainly proud of you, Afolabi - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 4/12/2016 3:46:00 PM
Lol! Thanks to poetrysoup. I also proud of her
Date: 4/10/2016 8:49:00 PM
Your love for her shines in this poem. Fareedah is a lucky lady.
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Afolabi Muideen
Date: 4/12/2016 3:41:00 PM
Thanks for dropping and commenting Ma, I love her a lot. Lol!
Date: 4/10/2016 8:06:00 PM
This is so romantic and so beautiful AM....I am feeling like falling in love again....You made my morning so romantic....Awesome awesome....
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Afolabi Muideen
Date: 4/12/2016 3:39:00 PM
Lol! Thanks for the pleasant comment friend.
Date: 4/10/2016 12:28:00 PM
oh such a lovely tribute she sounds so lovely Afolabi:-) hugs Jan xx
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Afolabi Muideen
Date: 4/10/2016 12:44:00 PM
Yes of cause, she is elegant and pleasant. I at-time wonder of her beauty, God really made her on friday. Thanks for the lovely comment. Much love!
Date: 4/10/2016 12:27:00 PM
So beautiful to have a love like that A. M., you should be smiling as well her when she reads : )
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Afolabi Muideen
Date: 4/10/2016 12:39:00 PM
I hope she loves this gem. Thanks for the support.
Date: 4/10/2016 7:59:00 AM
Lovely and romantic, Afolabi; your Fareedah must be a really special lady! ~ All the best // paul
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Date: 4/10/2016 10:26:00 AM
Yea, she is. I appreciate your support.