In Her Joy

Lost in Gods radiance, Abundant nature, In feminine form Tempts me with desire. Hungry eyes bewitched By the exotic Thirsts for the divine So she can be mine? I seek perfection Let her follow me.

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/10/2009 7:45:00 AM

What a wonderful way to start a new week reading your new poetry Jai.Thank you for sharing it. Love, Carol

Jai Garg

Date: 8/9/2009 11:14:00 PM

Just read you MY Pride. In true love there is no such thing as pride. Any man or women can and should expect their true lover to follow. Only catch, is they too must be willing to follow you if you wish it so. Ask your heart "Did She Follow"; For me she would follow her love even to hell.

Jessica Arteaga

Date: 8/9/2009 10:57:00 PM

very interesting, the middle part I enjoyed the most, did she follow?