In Her Joy

Lost in Gods radiance,
Abundant nature,
In feminine form 
Tempts me with desire.

Hungry eyes bewitched
By the exotic 
Thirsts for the divine
So she can be mine?

I seek perfection
Let her follow me.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Brown Avatar
August 10, 2009 at 7:45 AM
What a wonderful way to start a new week reading your new poetry Jai.Thank you for sharing it. Love, Carol
Garg Avatar
August 9, 2009 at 11:14 PM
Just read you MY Pride. In true love there is no such thing as pride. Any man or women can and should expect their true lover to follow. Only catch, is they too must be willing to follow you if you wish it so. Ask your heart "Did She Follow"; For me she would follow her love even to hell.
Arteaga Avatar
August 9, 2009 at 10:57 PM
very interesting, the middle part I enjoyed the most, did she follow?
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