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In Her Dreams

Asleep contented, dead to the world Inside she hears what the outside has never heard Her inner fears and nightmare dreams Flow within her torrent of screams What entities posses a soul so young What has she done, to become their chosen one Her nightmare starts with hands through the walls In every direction she hears them call Every time they touch, her blood they draw Their clamping hands like vice like jaws Her eyes open in chilling stare As she greets the entities sitting there Beings so different with humanoid shape Clothing scant in skeletal drape Piercing eyes in her mind they search This five, on her bedside perched Her body now in levitation This beings of five in realisation She has been chosen to continue their race Their experiments tested her grace She awakes in the morning in normal stare Her parents find she's just not there http://www.thehighlanderspoems.com/dark-2.php

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 4/16/2010 2:36:00 PM
This sounds like this girl was abducted by some other force-Aliens?Do i get it? for experimental Use.. great poem..original..much enjoyed Highlander:) Charma
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Date: 4/16/2010 9:51:00 AM
Eerie and rivetting Sci-Fi visual. I was captivated the entire time! I was hoping for her, the girl would have escaped somehow, but the story ends better this way. I feel as though I just watched a scary movie on TV. ooballugle!! (lips sounding as my head shakes off the intensity)
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Date: 4/16/2010 8:54:00 AM
Exciting write to read, James...I enjoy Sci fi stories..this is excellent..Thank you for reading and commenting on mine....Peace, Audrey ....SM
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Date: 4/16/2010 6:18:00 AM
i loved this poem especially the line "Her inner fears and nightmare dreams Flow within her torrent of screams" and "Her eyes open in chilling stare As she greets the entities sitting there" a truly brilliant poem! keep writing- Crystal
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Date: 4/15/2010 10:35:00 PM
well written, but sent chills up my back
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Date: 4/15/2010 9:39:00 PM
I enjoyed the poem
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Date: 4/15/2010 8:48:00 PM
Nice one!
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Date: 4/15/2010 7:30:00 PM
Indeed, an alien abduction for the purpose of procreation. Very intriguing, Highlander. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 4/15/2010 6:18:00 PM
interesting poem, must have been abducted by aliens?
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Date: 4/15/2010 4:24:00 PM
Awesome writing- reminded me of Constantine
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Date: 4/15/2010 4:01:00 PM
This peice is amazing...i like how the emotion comes out..."Every time they touch, her blood they draw, Their clamping hands like vice like jaws" gave me good chills...i loved it...Great Writes...God Bless...-Brittany-
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Date: 4/15/2010 4:01:00 PM
if you don't mind, perhaps you could suggest some of my poetry to other people?
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