In Her Dreams

Asleep contented, dead to the world
Inside she hears what the outside has never heard

Her inner fears and nightmare dreams
Flow within her torrent of screams

What entities posses a soul so young
What has she done, to become their chosen one

Her nightmare starts with hands through the walls
In every direction she hears them call

Every time they touch, her blood they draw
Their clamping hands like vice like jaws

Her eyes open in chilling stare
As she greets the entities sitting there

Beings so different with humanoid shape
Clothing scant in skeletal drape

Piercing eyes in her mind they search
This five, on her bedside perched

Her body now in levitation
This beings of five in realisation

She has been chosen to continue their race
Their experiments tested her grace

She awakes in the morning in normal stare
Her parents find she's just not there




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Chircop Avatar
April 16, 2010 at 2:36 PM
This sounds like this girl was abducted by some other force-Aliens?Do i get it? for experimental Use.. great poem..original..much enjoyed Highlander:) Charma
M Avatar
April 16, 2010 at 9:51 AM
Eerie and rivetting Sci-Fi visual. I was captivated the entire time! I was hoping for her, the girl would have escaped somehow, but the story ends better this way. I feel as though I just watched a scary movie on TV. ooballugle!! (lips sounding as my head shakes off the intensity)
Haick Avatar
April 16, 2010 at 8:54 AM
Exciting write to read, James...I enjoy Sci fi stories..this is excellent..Thank you for reading and commenting on mine....Peace, Audrey ....SM
Wilkins Avatar
April 16, 2010 at 6:18 AM
i loved this poem especially the line "Her inner fears and nightmare dreams Flow within her torrent of screams" and "Her eyes open in chilling stare As she greets the entities sitting there" a truly brilliant poem! keep writing- Crystal
Roberts Avatar
April 15, 2010 at 10:35 PM
well written, but sent chills up my back
Mehta Avatar
April 15, 2010 at 9:39 PM
I enjoyed the poem
A   Avatar
April 15, 2010 at 8:48 PM
Nice one!
Devonshire Avatar
April 15, 2010 at 7:30 PM
Indeed, an alien abduction for the purpose of procreation. Very intriguing, Highlander. Love, Carolyn
Culverhouse Avatar
April 15, 2010 at 6:18 PM
interesting poem, must have been abducted by aliens?
White Avatar
April 15, 2010 at 4:24 PM
Awesome writing- reminded me of Constantine
Moon Avatar
April 15, 2010 at 4:01 PM
if you don't mind, perhaps you could suggest some of my poetry to other people?
Moon Avatar
April 15, 2010 at 4:01 PM
This peice is amazing...i like how the emotion comes out..."Every time they touch, her blood they draw, Their clamping hands like vice like jaws" gave me good chills...i loved it...Great Writes...God Bless...-Brittany-
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