Mohamed Adel Poet Rhyme

In Heaven

I will try to be a good man
And do good deeds as long as I'm livin'
I will try to behave as I can
Shall I eventually go to heaven
                                    
For I hear there you can ask God for....
Anything you want, whatever it may be
I'll try to be good shall I go to heaven
So I can ask him to make you love me!

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Michael Tor September 6, 2015 at 7:16 AM Very nice Mohammed. Salvation is not earned but is given freely by accepting Jesus and asking for forgiveness. He then accepts you into heaven. He has always loved you since he knew you.