In Grasping Life's Meaning

Poet's Notes
(Show)

Become a Premium Member and post notes and photos about your poem like Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser.


 

IN GRASPING LIFE'S MEANING Twenty-nine years and thirty six days I am able to savor the gift of life but oftentimes I ask, Have I truly grasp, what life's mean? I am curious. I want to learn. I am to absorb for life is a door of discoveries... Green leaves rustling a tangent sound o'er the bush of finite delight or the swift sways of the winds-- somehow, the sounds tell: I am not alone. Beneath the earth a seed can grow nurtured by hands, sprinkled daily with love later flowers may bloom and glow Somehow, the sight shows me of beauty. Lured, one day I picked it up and put it near my nose uplifting my spirit, tickling the air but imperceptibly it withers, still I held it best and with its last life brought my soul at length. Success or failure are real, but am not scared to go on for life is an opportunity for growth and maturity. As I age, becoming exposed, tried and molded by trials that rain to my path, my views changed and matured as how I face to react, counteract situations... Seeing the world as of today where competition and survival is spelled harder pushing each one and for some it's draining, too challenging that some even considered death as the best solution. I am grateful that I am made because of love though my experiences taste are not all sugar Some are sour, bitter but wow they all taught me and let me appreciate: life is beautiful. I am only given years to live, the choice to be productive is within me, for life itself is a gift of possibilities. Upon my hands lies the chance of having less or having more dependent all to the decisions and actions, I pursue to work on... Being all aware that this life is not only given for me to live it alone but also to be a channel of a better life(or otherwise) to someone else's life... Society and natural ageing may cause some changes in me but I must embrace, accept it, use it to bring forth the essence of living and not merely existing... _________________________________________________________ 4:55 pm, September 20, 2015

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 9/30/2015 12:23:00 AM
Lovely poem on life with wonderful thoughts dear Olive! Congrats on big win!
Login to Reply
Date: 9/29/2015 8:46:00 PM
Olive, Congratulations on your HM placement. Love SKAT
Login to Reply
Date: 9/29/2015 7:57:00 PM
Congratulations Olive!
Login to Reply
Date: 9/29/2015 1:38:00 PM
Congratulations.
Login to Reply
Date: 9/29/2015 1:56:00 AM
In our most hectic days, there are times that our energy will suddenly diminished, and start asking, how far we have come as humans, we also marvelled at how far we are showered with God's blessings, and I have come to think that it is all about living life the best we can be. (^_^) Noel.
Login to Reply
Date: 9/24/2015 8:54:00 AM
Life is for Living! Open doors, kick doors down when you have to do so but truly live while existing here. You are only young once- make it count. We regret many things in old age but the biggest/saddest one is if we failed to truly live while young! Fantastic poem you gave birth to my friend. Super 7...
Login to Reply
Date: 9/21/2015 5:36:00 AM
Discovery, growth, maturity will open numerous doors for you Olive_eloi. Life is a continuous learning process; experience what it offers and make good use of the opportunities that come your way. Take care. Hugs // paul
Login to Reply
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 9/23/2015 1:43:00 AM
yes, I am doing it so PAul, thank you so much for a generous comment that somehow sums up what I mean here.. =`) hugs!
Get a Premium Membership
Get more exposure for your poetry and more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Reflection on the Important Things

Member Area

My Admin
Profile and Settings
Edit My Poems
Edit My Quotes
Edit My Short Stories
Edit My Articles
My Comments Inboxes
My Comments Outboxes
Soup Mail
Poetry Contests
Contest Results/Status
Followers
Poems of Poets I Follow
Friend Builder

Soup Social

Poetry Forum
New/Upcoming Features
The Wall
Soup Facebook Page
Who is Online
Link to Us

Member Poems

Poems - Top 100 New
Poems - Top 100 All-Time
Poems - Best
Poems - by Topic
Poems - New (All)
Poems - New (PM)
Poems - New by Poet
Poems - Read
Poems - Unread

Member Poets

Poets - Best New
Poets - New
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems Recent
Poets - Top 100 Community
Poets - Top 100 Contest

Famous Poems

Famous Poems - African American
Famous Poems - Best
Famous Poems - Classical
Famous Poems - English
Famous Poems - Haiku
Famous Poems - Love
Famous Poems - Short
Famous Poems - Top 100

Famous Poets

Famous Poets - Living
Famous Poets - Most Popular
Famous Poets - Top 100
Famous Poets - Best
Famous Poets - Women
Famous Poets - African American
Famous Poets - Beat
Famous Poets - Cinquain
Famous Poets - Classical
Famous Poets - English
Famous Poets - Haiku
Famous Poets - Hindi
Famous Poets - Jewish
Famous Poets - Love
Famous Poets - Metaphysical
Famous Poets - Modern
Famous Poets - Punjabi
Famous Poets - Romantic
Famous Poets - Spanish
Famous Poets - Suicidal
Famous Poets - Urdu
Famous Poets - War

Poetry Resources

Anagrams
Bible
Book Store
Character Counter
Cliché Finder
Poetry Clichés
Common Words
Copyright Information
Grammar
Grammar Checker
Homonym
Homophones
How to Write a Poem
Lyrics
Love Poem Generator
New Poetic Forms
Plagiarism Checker
Poetics
Poetry Art
Publishing
Random Word Generator
Spell Checker
Store
What is Good Poetry?
Word Counter