Millard Lowe Poet Tanka

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IN GOD’S RAINING GLORY

 

Without falling rain,

Where in this world would we be

Without God’s waters?

Please God, wet our will’s power,

With your hydrating guidance:-

 

With wisdom’s wetness,

And sunshine enlightenment,

Let us stream onward:

Frothing inequality,

With hydrating equity:-

 

In rain glory,

Let us get up and going:

Love’s laboring waits:

With God navigating us,

Let’s wet life with equity:-

 

In injustice's soils,

Let’s plow and sow justice’s seeds:

Reaping its onement:-

May the fruits of our labors,

Ever flow justice’s juice:-

 

And indeed God, please

Allow falling snow to freeze

Heated oppression:-

Then, let it just melt away

And be evaporated:-

 

IN GOD'S RAINING GLORY: A TANKERING FLOW

IN GOD’S RAINING GLORY

Without falling rain,
Where in this world would we be
Without God’s waters?
Please God, wet our will’s power,
With your hydrating guidance:-

With wisdom’s wetness,
And sunshine enlightenment,
Let us stream onward:
Frothing inequality,
With hydrating equity:-

In rain glory,
Let us get up and going:
Love’s laboring waits:
With God navigating us,
Let’s wet life with equity:-

In injustice's soils,
Let’s plow and sow justice’s seeds:
Reaping its onement:-
May the fruits of our labors,
Ever flow justice’s juice:-

And indeed God, please
Allow falling snow to freeze
Heated oppression:-
Then, let it just melt away
And be evaporated:-

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