In God's Eyes

A sudden feeeling comes over me as vast as a dark cloud
Introspection, a plubic view of inside myself
An outcry, a protest of fear, a proclaimation of Faith
A deep emotion, A spell so strong
That she casts over me with her eyes
Resist the evil that many men have desired in their hearts
Look beyond the faults 
Love endures and never fails
It has never blinded me in any way
Consider the new hope I have now
Even though the night is dark and deathly
despite all my enemies, i am still prepared for war
At times of peace I thank my fellow peers lost in the struggle
I cant blame or call names or deny the truth Think about it
I'm all painful memories and hoping that I rise out of doubts
Speechless exceptionally graced with communication skills
Data stretches it suffers a tiny sense of well being
it strengthens the message it gives it life
Information highways and souls transmitting updates
And reformers who can't grasp the transactions
Bottoming out scraping the danger to the point of destruction
Restored by The Almighty God who is understanding of our inner struggles
As the droplets of blood wash my sin away
And dread flees as the shadow does from the light
I know the battles are a small thing for us to overcome in God's eyes

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 12/25/2013 3:54:00 PM
Very true my friend, if God werent so understanding i think we would have been long wiped out by now, i love how you penned thisand i understand your frustrations but more than that God understands better.Blessings Brother,Carl
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Date: 11/13/2013 8:19:00 PM
Stay graounded in your faith, Tim...nothing is "chance"...learn from your experiences, no matter how hurtful they are..the falling and the rising..just know that you're never alone no matter what lies you may hear in the din.. God is with you..So lift you head and heart,.hold on to your faith because it is priceless! x Annalise
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Date: 6/25/2013 10:40:00 AM
Well written powerful and thoughtful
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