In Gethsemane

IN    GETHSEMANE



In a place called Gethsemane,. . . . .  

 A  wise man  returned to his disciples 
 And found them sleeping. 
“Could you men not keep watch
 With me for one hour?” he asked, 
“Are you still sleeping and resting?
  Look, the hour is near. . . . .  “

We are still sleeping and the earth hour
Is a mere  token symbol of care 
For the home we inhabit, where
It will need much more than one hour

To keep the health of our home in its prime
And our own health as it was meant :
For such a commitment 
Will surely take a lifetime.. . . . . . 

. . . . As the man in Gethsemane knew

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NOTE

(a)The first seven lines are based entirely on the words from Matthew 26:36-46
 
(b) My own small commitment is to never waste food of any sort
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Written  by  Sydney  Peck
Entered in  Nikko Palmario’s  Contest    Beyond Earth Hour Writing Challenge
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Kendrick Avatar
May 11, 2012 at 3:05 PM
Enjoyed reading your work..Great idea and presentation..Congrats on your win..Sara
Prabhu Avatar
May 11, 2012 at 9:26 AM
congrats on the contest placement
Brown Avatar
May 11, 2012 at 6:56 AM
Congratulations on your placement in Nikko's "Beyond Earth" contest Sydney. Love, Carol
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
May 11, 2012 at 5:51 AM
Congratulations on your Earth Hour win Sidney xx
Williams Avatar
May 11, 2012 at 3:27 AM
Sidney congrats on your win..David
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