In Flames

a nest
on fire
burnt in a haste
’tis a huge fire;

the inmates shout
going helter-skelter
even the men shout
running crazy faster;

who ablaze sets
such a new house?
even the goats
in wonder bounce!

’tis this old man
who shouts & shouts
’tis that old man
who gasps & shouts!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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October 22, 2009 at 2:11 PM
such a different world...sad story. Light & Love
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October 19, 2009 at 2:33 PM
thankxxx Canny for your encouraging comments about my poem ... the inspiration comes both from experience and spirituality ... luv your In Flames poem... very interesting... I hope all who read my poetry will be inspired to read more as I have been doing with all of the seasoned poets on this website... u are very talented...
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October 19, 2009 at 4:13 AM
Thank you for this most enjoyable read Canny. Hope you had a wonderful weekend. Love, Carol
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