In Eternal Sleep I Will Find Thee, Julia

As fiery beacons 
Blaze
And cut through the
Night;
As restless sleep
Doth so tax and
Trouble me;
And I hang upon 
A promise:
That my love
For thou
I did most fervently 
Swear unto thee!

As icy comets roar
And sail against
The galactic tides, 
Their streaming tails
Lingering upon a
Solar wind,
I will grasp
This one last chance...
To bare my soul
And chasten myself
From all my sins.

Then immortal wings
Will downwards sweep
From heavenly ramparts
Where divine Angels
Do so keep...
To gently raise me
To my feet,
And, softly brushing
The dust
From mine eyes,
Lift me high
To be seated down
Before the wise.

Whenceforth,
Hence so empowered,
Whilst slumbering 
Fantasies 
Once more take flight -
Unremitting and
Without respite:
When, passing through
Heavens doors...
To search you out
Across the sands of
Timeless shores.

Thus, finally, after 
Stumbling
Across starry Aeons 
Of an almost infinite age,
Throughout these 
Many anguished trials
Of forlorn, 
And seemingly, 
Endlessly
Despairing days,
To overwhelmingly 
Rediscover your 
Presence: 
Beholding your perfect 
Form -

Suddenly and inextricably 
Revealed 
Before my wonder-struck 
Gaze!

After enduring what feels
Like the damnation and
Curse of eternities 
Countless years,
Now, heretofore:
How I shall cherish 
And much adore...
This one true heart
Forever more.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 9/29/2017 11:13:00 AM
John you were born out of your time and I am glad because you have brought your talent from then to now. This is a great tribute to undying love. Thanks for sharing it.
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Date: 9/29/2017 1:01:00 PM
Thanks, Patricia...the poem was inspired by Romeo and Juliet; a tribute to all enduring and timeless love! My warmest regards this chill evening. :) john
Date: 1/11/2017 9:47:00 AM
This is so beautifully written, John. Some people live within us far from the time when we walk with them. You have captured this so well. Kathy
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Date: 1/13/2017 11:41:00 AM
Thank you, Kathy. In all truth I am not quite happy with the ending of the poem...I have tinkered with it many times; eventually I will get it just right. Thank you for your visits and kind comments, Kathy...I will be paying you a return visit very soon. All my very best regards. :) john
Date: 6/11/2016 6:20:00 AM
Bravo! I am on my feet ... CayCay
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Date: 6/16/2016 1:39:00 AM
Hi, CayCay. Thank you very much for the applause and generous accolade! I am still tinkering around with the last couple of verses...Even though this poem was written some time ago. Ah well...I will get there in the end. Lol! My very best regards, CayCay...And my warmest wishes as always. :) john
Date: 3/14/2016 10:01:00 AM
Hi John, what emotions of gentleness do sweep over me as i do read this excellent work from your pen. This is indeed a beautiful work, so well crafted, a true song of the heart my friend. When a work can sing into your heart as this one does John, it truly needs no more work. I am glad i like to read back in people's work for if i didn't i would have missed this priceless jewel. This is deserving of the highest rating John, a seven and definitely into my faves....Vlad.
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Date: 3/18/2016 10:07:00 AM
Hello, Vlad, my good friend. So very nice to see you visiting once again...You are always most welcome here! Your kind and generous comments are very much appreciated - Thank you! I am pleased you enjoyed the poem; my very best regards...And warmest wishes. :) john
Date: 12/30/2015 6:10:00 PM
Ahhh...you take me to another world...so beautiful !!! What a feast for all the senses. Thank you, John. Elaine
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Date: 12/31/2015 8:40:00 AM
And...thank you, Elaine! I am pleased you enjoyed the read...It was one of my first poems. All the very best! :) john
Date: 3/14/2015 7:37:00 AM
Your poem has sincerity encapsulated. Julia, xx
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Date: 3/17/2015 2:43:00 AM
Thank you, Julia. It was composed out of love. :) john.
Date: 2/10/2015 8:31:00 AM
A simply stunning piece of remembrance and love. Very special indeed!
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Date: 2/10/2015 11:38:00 AM
You are more than welcome, William, my friend. Your warm comments are very much appreciated!! :) john.
Date: 2/5/2015 8:18:00 AM
This one is a fav for me!! Trust me , it needs no more tweaking my friend! I often do that too, to my older poems . Go back weeks later and change a line or a few words to improve it.. Truly superb write my friend! A7..
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Date: 2/5/2015 6:45:00 PM
Thank you, Robert. Your kind comments are very much appreciated! Best regards!! :-) john.
Date: 1/8/2015 4:35:00 PM
This is so heartwarming but heartbreaking at the same time. I don't know if I should go "aww" or cry but beautiful poem none the less. :) - Holly
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Date: 1/8/2015 7:25:00 PM
Thank you, Holly! I am pleased you enjoyed the poem! :-) john.
Date: 1/5/2015 11:01:00 AM
Awwww!!!!! This is so beautifully penned John. I truly enjoyed reading this. Thank you!! Well done. :O) Keep up with the great work. Keep on penning. Thank you so very much for sharing your wonderful and creative talents with us. We all truly appreciate it. *S* Cynthia
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Cynthia Jones
Date: 1/5/2015 12:51:00 PM
Hi John. I know they are. :O) You are most welcome my friend. *S* Cynthia
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Date: 1/5/2015 11:04:00 AM
Hi, Cynthia. Your kind words are very much appreciated! Many thanks! :) john.
Date: 12/30/2014 11:15:00 AM
You are most welcome, Bindu...many thanks!! :) john.
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Date: 12/27/2014 11:59:00 AM
Thank you, Paul, for your kind words; much appreciated!! :) john.
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Date: 12/27/2014 6:54:00 AM
This is magnificent. I love the flow. I love the imagery. I love the message. Beautifully done, John.
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Date: 12/8/2014 1:52:00 PM
Once again...thank you! :) john.
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Date: 12/8/2014 1:51:00 PM
Thank you, Cona. You are very kind! Just like your husband my father was a pilot. He flew a mosquito (bomber/fighter) plane in WWII. He once told me that only up there in the clouds had he ever felt true peace. Strange really - men at war trying to kill each other amid such tranquility...how bloody ironic!! P.s i am proud to think my little poem evoked some former comments made from your husband..."Sitting in gods lap"...that is beautifully poetic!!!
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Date: 12/8/2014 8:07:00 AM
Hello, John. I can see, from comments posted, that you have walked into waiting arms on Poetry Soup. This fanciful flight took us up among the stars, and reminded me of when my husband told me about what it was like to break the sound barrier, and the absolute silence up there, "sitting in God's lap."
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Date: 12/4/2014 1:05:00 AM
Again...many, many thanks for your kind, encouraging words of appraisal! However i cannot rest until that last verse has been sorted out!! I know how to go about it now; when i decide on the words i will then update it. Cheers, Maurice. :) john.
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Date: 12/3/2014 1:39:00 PM
Tinker all you wish John but this is as good as it gets. Excellent!!!! A Fav!
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Date: 11/22/2014 8:08:00 PM
very romantic with old world charm!!! I especially loved the last stanza of this one.
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Date: 11/23/2014 1:08:00 AM
Finally!!! After even more tinkering with the first verse i think i have nailed it. Damn thing has been playing on my mind all night. :)
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Date: 11/23/2014 12:58:00 AM
Thanks, Andrea. I have tinkered with the third verse...again! Ah well...sigh. I cannot remember ever writing the "perfect" poem. someday...maybe. Lol.
Date: 11/22/2014 1:21:00 PM
You are a beautiful person. Without words.
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Date: 11/22/2014 2:16:00 PM
Thank you so much, Cindy Lu! P.s i have tweaked the poem (again) it reads better each time. :)
Date: 11/22/2014 4:09:00 AM
This tremulous verse simply melted me, John. How beautiful... thanks for sharing this! Such memorable lines throughout.I am in awe! Always, Laura
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Date: 11/22/2014 4:13:00 AM
Thank you, Laura. May i be permitted to say that your poetic lines are also rich in beautiful verse. :)
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