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In Each Passing Cloud

In Each Passing Cloud
In each passing cloud I glimpse my late sister I blow kisses to show her how I miss her She used to say she’d love to journey through space On a fluffy cloud to some faraway place. When we were young we loved watching clouds pass by And guessing what pictures they placed up on high I still do it though I am well past my prime It's a lovely way to spend passage of time. No doubt my sister plays the guessing game too Obviously she’d have a much clearer view Looking at picturesque clouds from high above With me down below and her sunny side up. Hopefully sis sees me in each passing cloud And remembers when we were once girls aloud How we’d heartily sing at top of our voice At church on Sunday singing songs of rejoice. I grieve o’er my sister and life seems empty How I’d love to hold her in hugs aplenty Till we meet someday I’ll play our favoured game With each passing cloud I will honour her name. 5th March 2023 *+*+* Each passing cloud Poetry Contest Sponsored by: JCB Brul
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Goldsmith Avatar
March 18, 2023 at 10:37 AM
Congratulations on your win. A lovely tribute/write/picture for your sister. So sorry. One day maybe you both will play in the clouds. Have a blessed day/weekend.................
Edmonds  Avatar
March 18, 2023 at 3:46 PM
Thank you Paula, I hope that my sister and I do meet again and play in the clouds, what a lovely thought. Blessings, Belle
Chuuk Avatar
March 14, 2023 at 9:27 AM
Belle, this brought back childhood memories with my sister. We used to lay in the grass and watch fluffy clouds and count birds flying by. Oh this is so beautiful and truly enjoyed it. Going to put it in my faves :)
Edmonds  Avatar
March 18, 2023 at 3:25 PM
Thank you so much Fin, I’m very pleased that you enjoyed the read, thanks for the fave… Belle
Wolf Avatar
March 12, 2023 at 8:32 PM
Thank you for this poem, which resonates so. Ever since I was a child, I have envisioned people I know in the shape of clouds. Some visions are tinged with sadness; others are happier. But the clouds rarely disappoint, amazingly enough. Excelsior! ~ Gershon
Edmonds  Avatar
March 18, 2023 at 3:24 PM
Thank you Gershon, clouds form some amazing images, I agree they never disappoint… Belle
Kamoonpuri Avatar
March 9, 2023 at 1:18 AM
I love watching clouds whenever free and this is a beautiful heartwarming soulful tribute in memory of your sister passed on. So well written she must be proud of you. Kudos!! <<<<<<<<<<<<<<>>>>*>>>>>>>>>>*********** Plz also read and comment my newest poem too"
Edmonds  Avatar
March 9, 2023 at 7:43 PM
Thank you S.zaynab I do hope my sister somehow saw this poem written in her memory. I will go and read your poem gladly… Belle
Fowler Avatar
March 6, 2023 at 6:22 AM
What a delightful poem and remembrance of your sister. Beautifully written Belle. Best for the contest! :)
Edmonds  Avatar
March 9, 2023 at 7:37 PM
Thank you very much Linda, it was good to write a memorial to my sister… Belle
Andresen Avatar
March 6, 2023 at 3:45 AM
- What a wonderful poem, Belle .... dear childhood memories - Good luck in the contest :) - hugs
Edmonds  Avatar
March 9, 2023 at 7:33 PM
Thank you Anne-Lise, I lost my sister last year, May 2022 after a long illness and yes memories of her are very dear… Belle
Daniel Avatar
March 6, 2023 at 1:41 AM
Somehow clouds bring beloved memories, don't they? nice dedication to your sister, Belle:)
Edmonds  Avatar
March 9, 2023 at 7:25 PM
Thank you Jo, yes clouds do bring back memories, those too precious to ever forget… Belle memories
Turner Avatar
March 5, 2023 at 3:53 PM
I'm a cloud watcher too, Belle. I like this sentimental piece. good luck!
Edmonds  Avatar
March 5, 2023 at 6:28 PM
Thank you Daniel, I appreciate your comments and good wishes. Belle
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