In Each of My Visions

I see you in the yearning of early morning's dawn
   Your arms outstretched, sheer nightgown on

I see you in the sparkle of the summer's dew
   Your lips moist with promise, in their ruby hue 

I see you at twilight, as the first star emerges
   The scent of your shadow informing my urges 

I see you as I lay me down on my pillow
   Your presence a comfort, like a weeping willow  

In each of my visions do you appear 
   Though I'd trade every one to see you here

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Date: 11/13/2018 10:17:00 AM
How poignant is your longing and how beautiful is your love.. your poem is so lovely in the tender heartache and wistful emotions expressed, dear Gershon. Warmest wishes my friend.. ~Susan
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Date: 11/13/2018 7:14:00 PM
Your comments send me soaring, Susan. Much appreciated! Best wishes, Gershon
Date: 11/13/2018 8:29:00 AM
I really like how you wove the different types of visions into a cohesive thought Gershon! The romantic line at the end is perfect. An excellent write !!
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Date: 11/13/2018 7:13:00 PM
Mike, your words are music to my ears. Thank you so much for your generous evaluation, my friend. ~ Gershon
Date: 11/12/2018 9:35:00 PM
Like the good book says, she will see you in each of her visions as many times as you see her. Okay, okay it doesn't exactly say that, but somewhere in some book it says something like that..lol (Topol) Love it!
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Date: 11/12/2018 10:04:00 PM
It is so comforting and heartwarming to know that the anything I have written is in sync with the Good Book. Thank you for sharing this, Charlie---even if it isn't "precisely so." Best wishes, Gershon
Date: 11/12/2018 9:25:00 PM
Love this, Gershon! A vision a turn on but nothing like like having her there!
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Date: 11/12/2018 10:18:00 PM
So true, Kim---nothing like flesh and blood, heart beating, pulse racing, passion soaring......
Date: 11/12/2018 8:04:00 PM
A beautiful rhyme, my friend.. So inspirational and romantic!! Bravo!! Blessings..
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/12/2018 10:02:00 PM
Robertina, a visit from you means that I have created a poem that soars to a new dimension---where you and your wonderful poetry reside. Thank you, my friend! :) gw
Date: 11/12/2018 6:32:00 PM
a great build-up to a perfect ending! very nice, gershon...
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/12/2018 10:01:00 PM
Ilene, your kind words spur me on! Thank you; thank you! Best wishes, Gershon
Date: 11/12/2018 6:03:00 PM
Hello Gerhon Wolf, you will see her in your visions wherever you look. Have a nice evening my friend.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/12/2018 8:53:00 PM
Thank you for your lovely thought. May it go from your mouth to God's ear, Darlene. Really and truly appreciated!! :) gw
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