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In Dreams Ii

As she fades a sparling tear floats,
It glows magically as it exits her divine flesh.  
I leap and I meet her touch once again
And together the whiteness consumes us,
Free falling to nothingness.

My mind awakens and eyes yellow descend
Upon my weakened body,
And Destiny lies strapped hovering behind
The yellow eyed beast.

To be continued……….

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Wilma Neels

Date: 6/3/2012 10:35:00 AM

Ronny, I just love the imagery in this write of yours.. I hope your weekend is a great one :) Wilma

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/30/2012 10:40:00 PM

Wow, what imagery!! the yellow eyed beast!! I sure enjoyed this.... from the little devil!

Cindy Lu

Date: 5/30/2012 6:45:00 AM

You have your own light, a cleanliness, so to speak, and nothing can really enetrate though seemingly it will, each day is given, and you are special with this purity you speak of~ enjoyable read. Cindy Thanks for the com to bring me to this... :)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 5/29/2012 4:32:00 PM

the tenderness of your words builds up a sentimental flow.. and that final line speaks so much!.. well done, ronny.. wow!..:) huggs