Ronny Madonsela Poet Free verse

In Dreams

In dreams i kiss destiny full on 
the lips
I hold her close as I gazed in 
her star lit eyes
She murmurs sofly before she 
lifts her hand
Her touch visits my face finally, 
my heart races
Then she fades into the 
whiteness reaching her palms 
out for me.

To be continued...
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Poet Destroyer A July 24, 2013 at 8:59 PM Ronny, Congratulations!!! Thank you for the wonderful win. :-) Epic, it is. <3 always & forever <3 ''LINDA

Poet Destroyer A June 3, 2012 at 7:28 PM HI RONNY,,, CONGRATS IN BRIAN'S CONTEST... XOX~PD

Andrea Dietrich June 2, 2012 at 2:43 PM I LOVE this, Ronny. Wow!!! And congratulations. FAVE

Debbie Guzzi June 1, 2012 at 2:18 PM A fine beginning! Congrad's on your win Light & Love

David Williams June 1, 2012 at 1:55 PM Ronny congrats on yoru win..David

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders June 1, 2012 at 5:39 AM Congrats Ronny on a fantastic win! Love and Blessings, Rhonda

Nette Onclaud May 31, 2012 at 12:15 PM cheers to you for the grreat win,ronny.. this is fabulous!. congrats and huggs!

Carol Sunshine Brown May 31, 2012 at 11:42 AM Congratulations on your win in the #180 contest Ronny. Love, Carol

Terry O'Leary May 31, 2012 at 11:10 AM Wonderful imagery... Congrats on your win... Terry

Elizabeth Wesley May 28, 2012 at 6:37 PM I see the fantastic viision too Ronnie; love those laswt 3 lines as they are so visual! A real beuty you wrote. Luv, Lizzie

Sara Kendrick May 26, 2012 at 10:27 AM Good work on an interesting topic..I hope that destiny holds many good things for you..Thanks for stopping by my blog..Thanks for letting me know that you entered my contest..I appreciate you participating in it..I am feeling better today..Sara

James Peranteau May 26, 2012 at 9:14 AM ....ill be waiting for your addition to this fantastic write dear poet ! Awesome ! Have a wonderful weekend....much love, james

Justin Debrosse May 26, 2012 at 2:33 AM Awesome moment captured here, what can be zapped in an instant!

Richard Palmer May 25, 2012 at 12:25 PM part 2,waiting

Phyllis Babcock May 25, 2012 at 9:40 AM So far a wonderful write and looking forward to the next part. phyl

Shaz Cheesman May 25, 2012 at 4:02 AM Wow Ronny........such sensitivity and u had me wanting to read more......glad u have more to add to the journey of this wonderful poem....Shaz

Nette Onclaud May 25, 2012 at 2:20 AM tenderly woven, ronny.. looking forward to the final lines...:) huggs! Ronny Madonsela May 25, 2012 at 2:27 AM thanx, il try and am it worth while.