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In Cool Waters of Her Mind Collab

In cool waters of her peaceful mind are rare pools of depth unknown, and wonder-pearls most rare to find, lie great treasure there alone Many reach them, yet none can but often, in his lonely night --- she smiles upon some weary man, and all his heavy burden grows light Should the wind whisper a thousand names, from her lips giving soft-love to each, a peck for hope in dire days; though the world be doused in darkest heat In coolness the waters doth breathe shiny-secrets, where hope is found in hallowed halls, no darkness, despair, nor regrets ---- lavishing in cool, speckled waterfalls First two stanzas written by Robert Lindley Last two stanzas written by Keith O.J. Hunt

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Date: 12/9/2016 5:31:00 AM
Always a pleasure to collaborate with you my friend. Cool waters and soft love, what more can a man ask for ?
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Date: 12/8/2016 11:11:00 AM
Great one Keith. Well done :)
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