In Cool Waters of Her Mind Collab

In cool waters of her peaceful mind 
are rare pools of depth unknown, 
and wonder-pearls most rare to find, 
lie great treasure there alone 

Many reach them, yet none can 
but often, in his lonely night --- 
she smiles upon some weary man, 
and all his heavy burden grows light 

Should the wind whisper a thousand names, 
from her lips giving soft-love to each, 
a peck for hope in dire days; 
though the world be doused in darkest heat 

In coolness the waters doth breathe shiny-secrets, 
where hope is found in hallowed halls, 
no darkness, despair, nor regrets ---- 
lavishing in cool, speckled waterfalls 


First two stanzas written by Robert Lindley
Last two stanzas written by Keith O.J. Hunt
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Lindley Avatar
December 9, 2016 at 5:31 AM
Always a pleasure to collaborate with you my friend. Cool waters and soft love, what more can a man ask for ?
Sands Avatar
December 8, 2016 at 11:11 AM
Great one Keith. Well done :)
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