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In Clear Sapphire Sky

in clear sapphire sky the bright sliver of moon glows ...owl ruffles feathers Francine Roberts 30/10/2011

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Debbie Guzzi

Date: 4/27/2012 6:20:00 AM

sorry to keep bugging you but I still have no confirmation that Ever Changing Sky has come through to your contest with the correct notation you wanted..G>Lightfoot's song *Unsettled Ways is noted at the bottom. Just let me know it's Ok now? Light & Love

Robert Pettit

Date: 12/14/2011 11:20:00 PM

An excellent haiku poem. I've seen so many, but this one is clearly one of the best.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/24/2011 12:37:00 AM

FRANCINE, ;-) stopping by to wish you and everyone a happy THANKSGIVING! ENJOYED YOUR HAIKU...,, `" Have yourself a wonderful and lovely holiday. God Bless,.. p.d.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 11/16/2011 11:30:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in the Strict Haiku contest Francine. Love, Carol

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/12/2011 5:24:00 PM

Congrats on your winning work..Sara

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 11/11/2011 12:08:00 PM

I am smiling with this Francine! I really liked how you described the sky then brought the focus to the owl :) Congrats! :D

Kash Poet

Date: 11/11/2011 11:12:00 AM

Beautiful sketch of a night sky here.Congrats Franclne on your win.

Gwendolen Song

Date: 11/11/2011 6:34:00 AM

Francine...congrats on painting a great night scene with your winning haiku....we've come a long way since our leaning Texan peach and pecan trees the other night, right? ha ha..hope today is a wonderful one for you. Kick up your feet and enjoy the day! Gwendolen

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/10/2011 8:56:00 PM

Congrats Francine on a wonderful write and win for this Haiku contest of strict rules luv.. u did an amazing piece ...

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/10/2011 8:27:00 PM

I just loved this. To me it should be higher! Congrats.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/7/2011 9:06:00 PM

I like this one too. I am seeing a real quality shining in the members' haiku lately! I think all you guys are taking private lessons!!! Which is your entry for charles? I bet it's marvelous.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 11/6/2011 9:28:00 AM

There used to be owls in my backyard in Tallahassee, Francine. Every evening a strange-sounding one would serenade. Love the image of this owl beneath the "sliver of moon." As for riding, I started around age 5 too, but I never owned a horse. How lucky you were to finally get one! If you still enjoy riding, that's another thing we could do when we finally meet. Love, Carolyn

Sarah Seraphin

Date: 11/1/2011 4:38:00 PM

* “Sapphire Sky * A Sliver of Moon * Serenity &, Beautiful Images of You * My Dear Sweet Beautiful Francine * Not Only Ruffling Wings But, Swaying Trees * Dancing With the Breeze * Rejoicing In The Presence of Your Loveliness * Very Beautiful * My Luv, Always * Sarah.” *