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In Captivity

Ideal splendour
flames of emotions arise
desired and possessed.
Beauty in captivity
adoration blazing down.

August 2nd, 2018

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Paul Callus

August 8, 2018 at 1:20 PM

Captivated by love in all its splendor, Besma! Your poem is striking and expressive. Best regards // paul

Besma Riabi Dziri

August 9, 2018 at 4:03 AM

Thank you so much Paul! A generous praise I highly value! My pleasure and honour! Be blessed.

Demetrios Trifiatis

August 6, 2018 at 2:11 PM

Masterful writing , beautifying even beauty itself dear, Besma! Welcome back!

Besma Riabi Dziri

August 7, 2018 at 4:02 AM

Deeply touched by your kind and generous comment dear Demetrios! Thank you so much for your unique and praising feedback.. my pleasure and honour. Be blessed.

Susan Ashley

August 5, 2018 at 5:41 PM

Dear Besma, your ardent reader has greatly missed your poetic presence.. your poem is an inspired tribute to love’s splendor.. only a sensual heart and soul could portray such passionate love in such a thrilling and captivating way. Desired and possessed, to be a captive of such powerful love is to be enraptured in every way.. I’m so happy for your return my dear friend. Warmest wishes and love ~ Susan

Besma Riabi Dziri

August 7, 2018 at 3:57 AM

I'm very happy dear Susan to be among you once again! I have missed you too along with your gripping and unique reads.. I'm deeply humbled, honoured, elated and touched by your heartfelt, sincere and generous comments! Outshining and unique soul as you are dear Susan, I'm proud to befriend.. Thank you so much! My deepest regards.. hugs and love. Be blessed.