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In Calm of Dreams
When we sadly have left the world behind, how we had lived and loved is what survives. Quote - poet’s own * * *
In dreams the scene is divinely serene my loving arms hold you tightly, Irene I kiss those sweet lips on your pretty face calm in the magic of a warm embrace. Those enthralling eyes still shine, as always as expressively into mine they gaze Our hearts beating together in passion in quiet of night making love happen. Each other's hand we will tenderly clasp as we did in peaceful days of the past Singing songs we knew as we used to do whilst we two smooch beneath moonlight blue hue. As we trip and skip down memory lane we'll laugh and cry as we did once again Then our lonesome hearts will break up in pain for you've to fly back to heaven again. My darling it won't be long, so it seems in tranquil themes we’ll meet in calm of dreams.
11th May 2021 Writing Prompt - Calm - Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Constance La France * (Words in bold print are a requirement of the contest.)

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Date: 6/6/2021 1:39:00 PM
Beautifully expressed. The line "...our lonesome hearts will break up in pain" is especially poignant. Be well. Sincerely Brian
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Date: 5/25/2021 3:36:00 AM
Belle, well done and congratulations on your win in my Writing Prompt - Calm-Challenge with your beautiful poem and quote, love _Constance
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Date: 5/25/2021 4:50:00 AM
Thank you so much Constance, I am thrilled with the win… Love, Belle
Date: 5/23/2021 10:18:00 AM
such a touching piece belle and i love the quote, many congrats on your well deserved win. I find Constance's contests encourage me to go out of my comfort zone and write more melancholy style poems:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 5/23/2021 11:22:00 AM
Thank you Jan, I enjoy writing about the past and this one was written in memory of my mom and dad - William and Irene… Hugs, Belle :-) xx
Date: 5/23/2021 9:48:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A beautiful story/write. Have a blessed day as you enjoy your win........................
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Date: 5/23/2021 9:56:00 AM
Thank you very much Paula. Have a blessed Sunday yourself too… Belle
Date: 5/22/2021 10:10:00 PM
Congrats, Belle! Such a beautiful poem.
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Date: 5/23/2021 1:53:00 AM
Thank you Marilene, I wasn’t aware the contest had been judged, a lovely surprise… Belle
Date: 5/11/2021 5:55:00 PM
This is dreamy with satin sheets and dessert with whipped cream and a cherry on the nightstand. Love it, Belle. Superb! :) gw
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Date: 5/12/2021 12:28:00 AM
Sounds like a midnight feast to me Gershon, thank you ~ Belle :-)
Date: 5/11/2021 1:26:00 PM
Pity it is a dream. So full of emotions and imagery. Best for a win.
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Date: 5/11/2021 1:38:00 PM
Thank you Victor, my mom was named Irene and my dad used to sing the song “Goodnight Irene, I’ll see you in my dreams” that was the inspiration for this poem and of course Constance had something to do with the idea too… Belle
Date: 5/11/2021 7:39:00 AM
- A beautiful and touching poem, Belle :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 5/11/2021 8:25:00 AM
Thank you very much Anne-Lise. Hugs, Belle :-)