In Between, Silence

The oath spilled over my lips
If you hurt me, said she 
I will never forgive you!
No, it was not the words
Probably the pose, or the voice
Or was it the silence between?
But there was power, and I swore
A daunting spirit 

In Between, Silence!

Today, I awoke to the mocking bard
I am sorry, said she
Forgive me, forget me
It was the words, no pose, no voice
And the sinful silence aside,
There was power in the words
The daunting spirit.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 4/18/2013 8:23:00 AM
What a mystifying, awesome poem here. Silence can be harsh at times ... wrote a couple of poems about the solitude. It can act like a haven or a hell...hahahah it all depends. Have yourself an amazing week. Love the beginning to the end. Very full of sorrow, but yet, as Leo says, emotionally powerful. :DD It's an on-the-edge, yet thrilling read here, thankx for posting.
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Date: 5/17/2012 9:34:00 AM
A stark and sorrowful but emotionally powerful poem...I liked it.
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Date: 5/17/2012 8:38:00 AM
Wow..this is an interesting piece of art you presented..enjoyed..regards..INK-U-SCRIPT
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Date: 5/17/2012 9:01:00 AM
Thanks Pace. True story
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