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In Being With You

You come into me You plainly belong with me Take a picture of our love Contemplating life With one another open Harmonious hearts beat true Russell Sivey Entrant into PD's "(ANY) Poem Of the week....." contest 2/22/2012

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Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 2/23/2012 9:27:00 AM

Sweet words to wrap a person into the arms of love. Such emotion always is wonderful to read. :)

Jslambert Mister Roboto

Date: 2/22/2012 9:58:00 PM

I love the first line although I am more familiar with the other way around. vise versa :) Keep bringin' the Thunder!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/22/2012 4:14:00 PM

Reads like a winner..I am sure that PD will enjoy this one..Sara

Gwendolen Song

Date: 2/22/2012 4:13:00 PM

Oh....good luck in PD's contest...hip hip horray for this one!! Gwendolen

Gwendolen Song

Date: 2/22/2012 4:12:00 PM

I think we shall extend Valentine's through the month of March just for you dear, Russell. YOu are on a romantic roll here!! Nice emotive sedoka..Hey, thanks for stopping by to see my Paper Lanterns...a different kind of write for me..trying to expand a bit. :) Gwendolen

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/22/2012 1:45:00 PM

Good luck in contest Russell - thank you for comment on my poem today. - oxox love Anne-Lise