In Being With You

You come into me
You plainly belong with me
Take a picture of our love
Contemplating life
With one another open
Harmonious hearts beat true

Russell Sivey

Entrant into PD's "(ANY) Poem Of the week....." contest

2/22/2012
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Wesley Avatar
February 23, 2012 at 9:27 AM
Sweet words to wrap a person into the arms of love. Such emotion always is wonderful to read. :)
Mister Roboto Avatar
February 22, 2012 at 9:58 PM
I love the first line although I am more familiar with the other way around. vise versa :) Keep bringin' the Thunder!
Kendrick Avatar
February 22, 2012 at 4:14 PM
Reads like a winner..I am sure that PD will enjoy this one..Sara
Song Avatar
February 22, 2012 at 4:13 PM
Oh....good luck in PD's contest...hip hip horray for this one!! Gwendolen
Song Avatar
February 22, 2012 at 4:12 PM
I think we shall extend Valentine's through the month of March just for you dear, Russell. YOu are on a romantic roll here!! Nice emotive sedoka..Hey, thanks for stopping by to see my Paper Lanterns...a different kind of write for me..trying to expand a bit. :) Gwendolen
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February 22, 2012 at 1:45 PM
Good luck in contest Russell - thank you for comment on my poem today. - oxox love Anne-Lise
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