In bed half asleep

wiggling her toes in imaginary sand
trying her very best to drift back into dreamland



AP: Honorable Mention 2025
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Faulkner Avatar
July 17, 2018 at 2:41 PM
I bet she feels sand on her feet when she wakes up!
Gauthier Avatar
July 17, 2018 at 2:47 PM
Either way, it's a sign for an outing by the seashore.
Mcguire Avatar
July 16, 2018 at 11:00 PM
I imagine she is smiling while sleeping! Great poem!
Gauthier Avatar
July 17, 2018 at 5:25 AM
Thanks, Timothy, for your lovely visit and comment.
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