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In Bay's Tune

Sunset Bay Waves prancing in relays On crystal-decked tips, the late dusk requests To end a thrilled jig of lively water-dance fests While circles of ripple slowly ebb in spurts Yet shore’s mild notes commune With lovers whirling ‘neath a full moon; In bay’s tunes. Andrea Dietrich's Contest Choose Your Favorite Body

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Monterey Sirak

Date: 6/15/2014 10:22:00 AM

This scene is so incredibly lovely. Is it one you get to enjoy often?

Len Gasun

Date: 6/13/2014 12:10:00 PM

A splendid write reminding me of the beautiful sunset of Manila Bay. A well-done poem again as always my dear friend Nette. A winner for me. By the way, thank u so much for my awesome win in your contest. I'm so glad you appreciated my poem. I'm so sorry for coming only now 'cuz of my workload at school which exhausted me a lot esp. in the evening. In fact, i got fever w/ severe cold & worst was losing my voice. So I was absent. Hope I can go back tom. Tyssm again. Many big hugs! love lots, Lors

Cyndi Macmillan

Date: 6/12/2014 5:23:00 PM

:D GORGEOUS. Prancing in relays! Wonderful! Great imagery. So glad I stopped by to say "Hi" and to read your words, which always touch me. xox Cyndi