In Bay's Tune

Sunset Bay Waves prancing in relays On crystal-decked tips, the late dusk requests To end a thrilled jig of lively water-dance fests While circles of ripple slowly ebb in spurts Yet shore’s mild notes commune With lovers whirling ‘neath a full moon; In bay’s tunes. Andrea Dietrich's Contest Choose Your Favorite Body
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014


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Date: 6/15/2014 10:22:00 AM
This scene is so incredibly lovely. Is it one you get to enjoy often?
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Date: 6/13/2014 12:10:00 PM
A splendid write reminding me of the beautiful sunset of Manila Bay. A well-done poem again as always my dear friend Nette. A winner for me. By the way, thank u so much for my awesome win in your contest. I'm so glad you appreciated my poem. I'm so sorry for coming only now 'cuz of my workload at school which exhausted me a lot esp. in the evening. In fact, i got fever w/ severe cold & worst was losing my voice. So I was absent. Hope I can go back tom. Tyssm again. Many big hugs! love lots, Lors
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Date: 6/12/2014 5:23:00 PM
:D GORGEOUS. Prancing in relays! Wonderful! Great imagery. So glad I stopped by to say "Hi" and to read your words, which always touch me. xox Cyndi
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Date: 6/12/2014 5:05:00 PM
You do have the gift of taking the ordinary and make it an enigma or piece of art. Awesome as always dear nette Alofas Tiaua.
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Date: 6/12/2014 4:50:00 PM
Sheer poetry in motion! Good luck in the contest Hugs Jan xxxx
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Date: 6/12/2014 1:12:00 PM
- Beautiful ...... really beautiful. - Good luck in the contest, dear friend Nette :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 6/12/2014 12:36:00 PM
Magical! I was captivated by the sway and music of your words. Gotta have a taste of bay or sea right away!
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