In Awe

A gowning of palms Against a backdrop of awe Sunrise or sunset http://www.thehighlanderspoems.com/nature-10.php

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Colleen Bono

Date: 8/10/2010 2:04:00 PM

interesting thought.Thank you for your kind words on my poem.I am working on more until the sun comes back.

Wilma Neels

Date: 8/9/2010 12:41:00 PM

Awesome haiku, leaving the reader to embrace the thought of sunrise or sunset ~ Wilma

Sharon Tideswell

Date: 8/9/2010 9:49:00 AM

Nice haiku James. The last line is super, really crystallises the image in the reader's mind. I like the idea that the sense of awe is present at both sunrise and sunset. It could be equally effective posed as a question too. Nice one ~ Sharon :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/9/2010 8:52:00 AM

Good mornng James, your haiku just made me go AWE!! enjoyed. Have a nice awwwing day,..p.d.

Francine Roberts

Date: 8/9/2010 8:36:00 AM

just lovely