In Awe


A gowning of palms
Against a backdrop of awe
Sunrise or sunset






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Colleen Bono

August 10, 2010 at 2:04 PM

interesting thought.Thank you for your kind words on my poem.I am working on more until the sun comes back.

Wilma Neels

August 9, 2010 at 12:41 PM

Awesome haiku, leaving the reader to embrace the thought of sunrise or sunset ~ Wilma

Sharon Tideswell

August 9, 2010 at 9:49 AM

Nice haiku James. The last line is super, really crystallises the image in the reader's mind. I like the idea that the sense of awe is present at both sunrise and sunset. It could be equally effective posed as a question too. Nice one ~ Sharon :)