Deb M Poet Rhyme

-In Awe

Today, l went whale watching
I was left in complete awe
The magnificence of these beautiful creatures
Hugged my being to the core

Their amazingly huge yet graceful bodies
Playfully breaching into the air
Slapping their pecs in the water
To their own grandeur… oblivious and unaware

It was a truly special sight to behold
Nature in its rawest and purest form
To see such majestic creatures
Engulfed my being with a joyful warmth

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Hilda Greenhough September 18, 2024 at 8:31 PM I agree, whales are breathtaking. You are lucky to have seen them at play. Deb M September 26, 2024 at 5:56 AM Very blessed indeed Hilda .....amazing creatures! Thanks....Debx

Gershon Wolf September 14, 2024 at 8:06 PM Seems like you had 'a whale of a time' there, Deb. Deb M September 26, 2024 at 5:57 AM Hehe indeed we did BB!! Haven't been on PS properly in so long but will be back in the near future to catch up on your poems my friend! Debx

Terry Flood September 14, 2024 at 4:53 PM I’d love to see that; Annie would love to see dolphins…. I guess we’ll both be unfulfilled. Glad for you, to have had that experience…. Just you wait til the men from ZOG come to me… I’ll sure write about that! ;-) Deb M September 26, 2024 at 6:14 AM Do it my funny friend....l am sure there are places in the UK you could see them! I've been away from PS for a bit but will be back soon and catchup with all your poems! ZOG??? Thanks....Debx

Arthur Vaso September 13, 2024 at 10:51 PM Loved this poem, also, I did wave to you, and next month I am going on a diet! haha Deb M September 26, 2024 at 6:11 AM You make me laugh Arthur....l waved back to you! Ha....Thanks ....Debx

Panagiota Romios September 13, 2024 at 12:52 PM Hi Deb, that sounds like an awesome experience, you did a great job drawing a picture of it with words.and you explained your amazement in a superb way! Thanks.for reading me today. A Fish called Pangie Panagiota Romios September 26, 2024 at 9:07 AM By the way, I am a Pisces! LOL A Fish Called Pangie….))) You do not have to catch uo with me, I do mean that. Read a famous poet instead.that would be far better, like…”Splendor in the Grass” …………..by Wordworth or ee cummiings.., Merci, Pangie .. by Wordsworth! Deb M September 26, 2024 at 6:10 AM Thankyou dear Pangie....l.have been travelling and very busy but when all is back to normal l will be catching up on all poems including yours my lovely "Fish called Pangie" hehe!! Debx

Jay Narain September 13, 2024 at 10:12 AM Right, whale wtching is fun. Deb M September 26, 2024 at 5:54 AM It's beautiful to see Jay!! Thanks... Debx

Kim Rodrigues September 13, 2024 at 8:40 AM Wonderful! I went whale watching in Alaska. They thought the humpback went down for a while, when all at once the ocean opened and the magnificent creature breached. I was in awe! I’v never screamed out in glee like that..oh my. Nature goes about its ordinary business while we watch in wonder! Deb M September 26, 2024 at 5:55 AM We were in complete awe watching them Kim....a wonderful sight! Thanks....Debx

Lin Lane September 13, 2024 at 6:07 AM I saw them up close in September, and they truly are amazing to watch. I wanted to touch! lol Arthur Vaso September 13, 2024 at 10:52 PM Is not like I didn't wave over to you too! We whales swim all over the world!

Mike Gentile September 13, 2024 at 5:15 AM Deb, what a lovely tribute to the majesty of one of natures incredible creatures! A wonderful poem to read this morning!!! Happy Friday xx00 Deb M September 26, 2024 at 5:59 AM Aww thanks Mike! Will catchup.on your poems soon when l am back on P.S properly once again! Debx

Ink Empress September 13, 2024 at 3:51 AM Dear deb! Iv missed you! Been a while! And wow whale watching sounds fun! We have a spot here in the maldives too for that! And they are gorgeous! My dad has been asking me to write about whales! And i still havent haha. They are majestic and beautiful and so gentle too! Sending you light sweet deb! Pleasure reading you today Deb M September 26, 2024 at 6:18 AM Hi IE....yes its been a while....l have been in Dubai and Perth and have been sooo busy! We will back on P.S soon my lovely and will catch up with all l have missed! Write the Whales piem for your dad he will love it haha! Thankyou sweet girl.....Debx