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In Arrears

Mom mad Dad sad Cat spat Yes, that! Money’s tight Dire plight Work slow Bills flow In arrears Dun appears Extended date Payment late Credit score Very poor written February 27, 2022

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Indiana Shaw

Date: 2/28/2022 11:08:00 AM

You put your best foot forward on this Footle, Milton, a hard reality to its contents . . . : /

L Milton Hankins
Date: 2/28/2022 1:39:00 PM

Unfortunately so, Indiana. I just started scratching them out, and that's what turned up. Thanks for the read.

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 2/27/2022 3:48:00 PM

Liking this very much Hank. It is prancy.

L Milton Hankins
Date: 2/27/2022 5:04:00 PM

I have difficulty writing footles; yet, these just flowed out. Fun!

Anselmo Boles

Date: 2/27/2022 1:53:00 PM

True-to-life and funny Milt! I enjoyed it...ab

L Milton Hankins
Date: 2/27/2022 2:37:00 PM

Just doodling, Anselmo. I'm not a big fan of footles, but these just popped into my vacuous head!

John Lawless

Date: 2/27/2022 1:45:00 PM

Good to see you putting your best "footie" forward Milton....enjoyable.

L Milton Hankins
Date: 2/27/2022 2:37:00 PM

Thanks, John. I thought this would work. Footles are hard for me!

Jack Ellison

Date: 2/27/2022 1:13:00 PM

So simple... so great... short lines... my language! LOL Cheers Jack!

L Milton Hankins
Date: 2/27/2022 2:38:00 PM

Thanks, Jack. Cheers back. Hard tack. No slack!