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In Another Time

Clicked did my camera on a Myena eagerly feeding its young one. Fascinated, my heart pulsed warmly on this nature’s wonderful creation, I turned back in muse but my smile was wiped with a sight so scary; A young black girl struggled with a dagger stuck in bosom, dress torn apart. Paralysed I stood gathering my wits, knowing not I was part of a time unknown. She pointed to a small track voicing out some words incoherent and collapsed. Disoriented I followed the track shown, some steps ahead I found An infant lying in the bush, inert and naked; carefully cradle it, I did. A moan I heard, loud and agonised, I tread back the path dumbfounded. The girl’s hands flayed out desperately and her face softened in a smile. I handed her the baby, she sat ignoring her stab to hold it to her bosom. To a slap, I woke up finding myself on the grass, my camera at some distance. I stood with caution and looked around in a maze, the trees stood alert. I slept a deep sleep that night, dreamt of a happy black girl, baby in arms. She said “Thank you” with eyes glowing and vanished in the heather. A picture that came out from my camera looked quite weird, By the two birds, there was a shadow, a column of smoke it seemed! 17/07/16 Contest. In another time Sponsor: Ironik Zinc

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Date: 7/25/2016 7:02:00 PM
Hi Sunita, an excellent write, wonderful imagery and great story telling, bringing the reader so easily into the heart of your write and holding them there. I di love story poems whether they be short or long. Good luck in the contest. Have to give this write a seven. Hugs....Mike. XX
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Sunita U.D Palawon
Date: 7/26/2016 10:42:00 PM
I like counting stories, that's why I chose first to be novelist. Thank you for going through this. I'm glad you enjoyed it. :) Sunita
Date: 7/25/2016 9:02:00 AM
Such an imagination! I am impressed. Sunita,where do you stay ?
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Sunita U.D Palawon
Date: 7/25/2016 9:51:00 AM
Thanks Anisha for reading it and for the nice world. :) Sunita, I'm from the island of Mauritius :D
Date: 7/21/2016 12:53:00 PM
A beautiful poem my lovely friend. Good luck in the contest. Loved always, bl
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Date: 7/21/2016 8:03:00 AM
Excellent. Great poem and enjoyed reading it. Thanks fro sharing it.
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Sunita U.D Palawon
Date: 7/21/2016 10:32:00 AM
Thanks for the kind words and for going through it. Regards Sunita.:)
Date: 7/20/2016 3:47:00 PM
wow, you have SUCH an imagination, Sunita. A wonderful gift!
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Sunita U.D Palawon
Date: 7/21/2016 10:30:00 AM
Thanks Andrea...actually some of these things are linked to history of my country. I don't know them but every part of my country talks of something, it seems to me; a buried chest of treasure, bodies, distressed lovers and as it is a small island it sets the mood to write....or may be i'm receptive to these moods. :D:D
Date: 7/18/2016 8:26:00 PM
Captivating theme, well done Sunita...
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Sunita U.D Palawon
Date: 7/20/2016 10:34:00 AM
Thanks you see this from that angle and thanks for going through it. Regards Sunita. :)
Date: 7/18/2016 3:40:00 PM
very nice, sunita. Can you explain this contest to me? I could not find the example the judge was talking about in the directions.
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Sunita U.D Palawon
Date: 7/20/2016 10:33:00 AM
Hi Andrea, thanks for going through it. Replied via soup mail. All the best. Sunita.

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