In Another Time

You and I have met before,
Roaming the sweaty streets of Cairo,
Listening to the sound of the desert,
Searching for the hidden oasis.
Alas – that was in another time.

You were sleeping
As the caravan moved on.
I was gathering the fragments
Of a broken song. And life passed,
And the next, and the many,

But in life´s spinning cycles
We will meet again and again,
And there will always be
A faint remebrance
And a faint sorrow.

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This was my first poem posted on PS, but it was written many years ago. I have been a member for a year. I like being part of a community of poets. The main way PS helps me become a better poet is that it motivates me to sit down and write. 
I actually still like this poem, some images still speak to me.
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Gauthier Avatar
July 17, 2018 at 3:00 PM
Wow, Agnes. I love the exotic flavour of this poem. A FAVE for me.
Rodrigues Avatar
November 17, 2017 at 8:55 AM
It is a beauty of a first poem! So romantic and sad, with a wonderful setting. Love it, Agnes!
Ranjini Avatar
April 23, 2017 at 2:10 PM
Awe! This poem is so deep.. Loved it..grt job Agnes..
Krampe Avatar
April 23, 2017 at 6:59 PM
Thank you, Manu.
White Avatar
April 7, 2017 at 5:15 AM
I visited your page to be able to read your first poem here. I am Egyptian, and this made me smile :) Life's strange cycles, and how displaced we can feel... Beautiful poetry Agnes. You're such a great poet.....
Krampe Avatar
April 7, 2017 at 7:03 AM
Thank you, Darren. This was my first ever poem in English, and the only one I wrote for decades. I was living in California, and a friend posed a poetry challenge and, if I recall correctly, gave the second line as a prompt. I ended up being the only one to write a poem ... and this is it :)
Dietrich Avatar
August 7, 2016 at 6:15 PM
wow, tones of reincarnation in this one. I love your style, Agnes. My favorite line: gathering the fragments of a broken song.
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August 6, 2016 at 1:51 PM
- A beautiful poem, Agnes - Welcome to the Poetry soup :) - hugs // Sun :)
Krampe Avatar
August 6, 2016 at 5:06 PM
Thank you, Sun
Duet Avatar
August 5, 2016 at 10:08 PM
Hi Agnes...I like it. Very heartfelt I'm sure.
Krampe Avatar
August 6, 2016 at 5:25 AM
Thank you, Carole.
Kimathi Avatar
August 2, 2016 at 7:44 AM
Mystical and beautiful!!! Congrats Agnes, for having your poem featured in the Poetry Soup homepage!!! ;-)
Krampe Avatar
August 2, 2016 at 11:01 AM
Thanks for your kind words, Teddy.
Arnone Avatar
July 31, 2016 at 4:15 PM
Beautiful depiction of a reincarnated romance. :-)
Krampe Avatar
August 1, 2016 at 5:35 AM
Thank you, Tom.
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July 16, 2016 at 1:21 AM
Agnes, Welcome to poetry soup, after reading this I feel as if you are an Accomplished writer. Glad to see you enjoying it so much here. Flourishing among this community is easier than you think. Keep up the good work. *SKAT*
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July 16, 2016 at 9:20 PM
Hi SKAT, thanks for the warm welcome and your kind comment. I am looking forward to reading people's poems and being active on this forum. Agnes
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July 16, 2016 at 12:12 AM
Agnes, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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