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Written on February 2, 2025

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In Another Life

Stardust summer, bursting with firefly desires On the twilight, consumed by night’s amazing Wild and willing, dew dreams sing in soft satires Dusk is left with lover’s quiet stargazing Shortly, a shadowy moon glows like wildfires Our time’s soon gone despite our spirit’s praising In some other life our hearts might have been sure This maze of stars and moon form pleasures so pure
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mysore Avatar
March 2, 2025 at 7:30 PM
'Our time’s soon gone despite our spirit’s praising' beautiful line, the poetic form seems difficult too. You write effortlessly. Congratulations on your win dear poet. Cheers!!!
Dietrich Avatar
March 2, 2025 at 1:57 PM
This poem has such lovely imagery, how could I not give it a first place? Also I love the interesting poetry form you went with. Big congrats in my contest.
Christian Avatar
February 2, 2025 at 12:57 AM
nice one.
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