IN AND OF BOTCHED SOWN UNAWARENESS

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Just unlock your mind,

And let its waves freely flow:

Frothing awareness:-

I thought you needed my help;

Me, lovingly unaware:

How unfortunate,

My mental awareness botched;

My mind blindsided:

Triumphant love shadowing

Forgiveness being denied:-

We reap what we sow.

To reap love, you must sow it:

Life’s divine wisdom:-

How could I have sown hate?!

Please God, reveal it to me:-

Ready and waiting,

Like a young ripe banana

Picked for love’s pudding,

Sage forgiveness faithfully

Waits, mixing in love’s pudding:-

IN AND OF BOTCHED SOWN UNAWARENESS

Just unlock your mind,
And let its waves freely flow:
Frothing awareness:-
I thought you needed my help;
Me, loving unaware:

How unfortunate,
My mental awareness botched;
My mind blindsided:
Triumphant love shadowing
Forgiveness being denied:-

We reap what we sow.
To reap love, you must sow it:
Life’s divine wisdom:-
How could I have sown hate?!
Please God, reveal it to me:-

Ready and waiting,
Like a young ripe banana
Picked for love’s pudding,
Sage forgiveness faithfully
Waits, mixing in love’s pudding:-

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