In An Instant

Eyes meet. 
Nerve endings tingle. 
That spark of something fills the air. 
A connections between two people- instantaneous 
And within moments, the certainty settles 
Like a soft new blanket 
Warm and reassuring 
With no fuzz balls to mar its perfection. 
This is what has been missing. 
The silken throw pillow on the bed of life. 
The one that enhances every other texture and hue. 
It at once soothes the touch and sharpens the vision. 
Perfection and completion in a moment 
When love is found 
And excitement abounds.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 5/12/2015 4:31:00 AM
Phenomenal! I was just taken back to a place I've been before...and I loved it ..Love it my friend...
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Jaycee Cervenka
Date: 5/12/2015 8:48:00 AM
Thanks so much Allan..coming to poke around on your page. jan
Date: 4/1/2015 10:49:00 AM
An excellent write! "A connection between two people" That feeling that someone maybe the one well there is nothing like it!
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Jaycee Cervenka
Date: 4/1/2015 1:23:00 PM
Thank you Armond!
Date: 3/27/2015 1:33:00 PM
Your words play within our hearts and their magic comes alive and fill us with feelings of love, very romantic. Emile. #7
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Jaycee Cervenka
Date: 3/30/2015 8:14:00 AM
Thanks you Emile for the Rating!
Date: 3/26/2015 8:36:00 PM
I love your romantic discription. Love makes everything around us feel perfect for a time. Even when the fuzz balls appear the blanket of love still comforts and reassures us.
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Jaycee Cervenka
Date: 3/27/2015 12:57:00 PM
blankets--fuzz balls come with time when things are well worn and beloved, but would hate to have them straight out of the package..LOL
Date: 3/26/2015 7:08:00 PM
Wow, Janet, such awesome, inspiring words that describe the instant magic of love. Love your poem, 7+Fav. Sandra
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Jaycee Cervenka
Date: 3/27/2015 11:37:00 AM
Thanks Sandra. very flattered that you made it a Fave! ~Jan
Date: 3/26/2015 5:53:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your work..Sara
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Jaycee Cervenka
Date: 3/26/2015 6:01:00 PM
Thanks Sara! Be by to return the favor soon. Time to cook supper here! My growing boys say Poetrysoup doesn't fill them up. How silly is that! ;-)
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