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Common Raven Identification, All About Birds, Cornell Lab of Ornithology

In a Zen Breath

                                                                       

In a Zen Breath

 
In my Zen garden I have created a tranquil place, the peace and serenity I find there- I embrace. It started as nothing but emptiness but I had a plan, installed window boxes with the help of a handyman. And also got hooks for hanging green ivy that lingers, oh, I love how they creep with their reaching fingers. I selected flowers for their blooms and their softness, and over the summer I have build a garden fortress ! Each new 'morn I go there to meditate and find peace, where all tension and worries I am able to release. Oh, now my garden created is my my safe haven, although, today I was visited by a huge black raven. He was big and fierce looking and was gazing at me, but when I stood up and got closer he did not flee. We looked at each other and I felt his strength healing, I saw his wisdom, and his great energy- I was feeling. I think most people identify the black raven with death but today I have found my spirit animal in a Zen breath. ____________________ July 26, 2021 Poetry/Sequenced Couplets/In a Zen Breath Copyright Protected, ID 07-1375-780-26 All Rights Reserved, 2021, Constance La France Written for the Standard Contest, A Brian Strand Couplet sponsor, Brian Strand, Judged 07/28/2021
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De Beaulieu Avatar
July 26, 2021 at 3:54 PM
Hello Constance, oh this is so peaceful this poem. i felt calmness as I read it. it will be my fav. Sernity and Love Darlene
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July 27, 2021 at 11:21 AM
Hello Constance, you are welcome. Friendship & harmony. Darlene.
La France Avatar
July 27, 2021 at 8:13 AM
Darlene, thanks for visiting my poem and for the nice comment, and compliment and the FAV ~ friendship and harmony _Constance
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