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In A World Where I Do Not Exist Poetry Contest

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In the world, where I do not exist is the world without love and creative minds for people in it have no emotion or natural intelligence for they act like robots for everything is done for them. They do not smile; they wave a hand to say, hi! They do not laugh that those sounds of a belly laugh, when your stomach hurts, is non-existent. They do not speak words of love that give butterflies. They do not think for everything is programmed. All they must do is choose and push the buttons pertaining to the work or activities they need to do in the world of automation or advanced technology. Creative minds with creative thinking applied in various careers or arts are considered nothingness. They use artificial intelligence using machines, sensors, electric cars in their real world … A world so monotonous, repetitive, tedious, dull. A world lacking in excitement, lacking authenticity, so boring for people with creative minds, such as artists, musicians, poets, like me is not in it ...

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Date: 9/8/2024 10:48:00 AM
I really enjoyed your poem! Congratulations on your placement!
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Marilene Evans
Date: 9/8/2024 10:54:00 AM
Thank you for visiting, Robert. I'm glad you enjoyed the poem and thank you again. Have a great day.
Date: 9/7/2024 7:50:00 AM
Your poem is one that many will be able to relate to and you have expressed it really well.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Marilene Evans
Date: 9/7/2024 8:52:00 AM
Thank you so much SO for my placement and for your kind words. Hope it's not too hot over there. We're having a heat wave, was 114 yesterday and been over 100 the last 5 days and still going. Blessings to you.

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