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In a world where I do not exist

In a world where I do not exist, Silent specters softly glide, Whispers wilt in twilight’s twist, Echoes ebb, and shadows hide. Time’s thread frays, a fading seam, Dreams are dust, dispersed in wind, Life’s lantern dims, a distant beam, Lost in night where stars rescind. Footprints fade in phantom sand, Words are wisps in woven mist, In this realm, no guiding hand, Just a ghost the dawn dismissed.

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Date: 9/7/2024 10:29:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your creative/wonderful  write. Have a blessed/fun day with your win......................
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Date: 9/7/2024 7:56:00 AM
Your poems rhymed very well.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Date: 8/28/2024 3:47:00 PM
Very cool. I have no clue how to approach this. Plus I was on a vacay and I am so behind on both comments as well as poetry!
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Date: 8/27/2024 3:34:00 PM
Provocative piece, JN. Pondering. :o))
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Date: 8/27/2024 2:59:00 PM
A very enjoyable read!
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Date: 8/27/2024 2:16:00 PM
Hello Jay, you really let your imagination go on this poem. Enjoy your evening m y friend. /Darlene/
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Date: 8/27/2024 11:33:00 AM
Ghostly figures glide through your poem - the Ghost of no past, present or future. Well done, Jay!
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