In a World of Magic and Logic

In a world of magic,
Silent speaks across the winds,
Where trees scatter news,
Of places with loving beings.

In a world of logic,
Gossips speaks together with sins,
Are spread by sweeten lips,
With countless sorrow and pain.
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DARKLY
A Sonnet In The Wind~contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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October 1, 2013 at 8:27 PM
lovely win ............. LUV.............. SKAT
Adams Avatar
September 29, 2013 at 7:06 PM
lovely write my poetic friend....congrats on your win :)
Morgan Avatar
September 29, 2013 at 11:44 PM
my humble help Sandra
Richards Avatar
September 29, 2013 at 1:46 PM
Nicely done !! Congratulations on your win!!
Lamoureux Avatar
September 29, 2013 at 12:39 PM
Spectacular piece! Congrats!
Anglesey Avatar
September 29, 2013 at 10:09 AM
Congrats on your win! So much talent in you at the age of 15! Lovely magical piece of poetry flowing in the wind.
Jones Avatar
September 29, 2013 at 8:38 AM
Very unique....enjoyed it..congratulations!
Bunch Avatar
September 6, 2013 at 4:14 AM
I love the title and the idea and even the imagery, but when did Logic become gossip lol? Sorry it's the philosopher in me speaking. I did get the idea lol, the juxtaposition of magic and logic. Good work and thanks for your comments.
Morgan Avatar
September 6, 2013 at 8:25 PM
thank you wayland
Anglesey Avatar
September 2, 2013 at 7:21 PM
I figured out why I am drawn to your poetry. Great sense of poetic conflict always a buzz for a reader like me... Really like your style :)
Morgan Avatar
September 2, 2013 at 8:59 PM
wrote this a long time ago without any idea what i was writing i was 15yrs i think so what does a teen think at that age? thanks Karen
Deschler Avatar
August 29, 2013 at 3:06 PM
Very nice piece of poetry you've written here! I really enjoyed reading this one!
Morgan Avatar
August 29, 2013 at 4:20 PM
glad you like it Miss Kelly thanks
Mc Mills-Cooper Avatar
August 29, 2013 at 12:58 PM
Good poem DM! I like the contrast of Magic vs. Logic. Two great forces to write about indeed! MC
Morgan Avatar
August 29, 2013 at 4:21 PM
indeed mc and when i wrote it first i had no idea it was going to turn out this way. . . lols thanks buddy. dm
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