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In a World of Magic and Logic

In a world of magic, Silent speaks across the winds, Where trees scatter news, Of places with loving beings. In a world of logic, Gossips speaks together with sins, Are spread by sweeten lips, With countless sorrow and pain. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~POETESS DARKLY A Sonnet In The Wind~contest

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Skat A

Date: 10/1/2013 8:27:00 PM

lovely win ............. LUV.............. SKAT

Sandra Adams

Date: 9/29/2013 7:06:00 PM

lovely write my poetic friend....congrats on your win :)

Danesh Morgan
Date: 9/29/2013 11:44:00 PM

my humble help Sandra

Carrie Richards

Date: 9/29/2013 1:46:00 PM

Nicely done !! Congratulations on your win!!

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 9/29/2013 12:39:00 PM

Spectacular piece! Congrats!

Karen Anglesey

Date: 9/29/2013 10:09:00 AM

Congrats on your win! So much talent in you at the age of 15! Lovely magical piece of poetry flowing in the wind.

Donna Jones

Date: 9/29/2013 8:38:00 AM

Very unique....enjoyed it..congratulations!

Wayland Bunch

Date: 9/6/2013 4:14:00 AM

I love the title and the idea and even the imagery, but when did Logic become gossip lol? Sorry it's the philosopher in me speaking. I did get the idea lol, the juxtaposition of magic and logic. Good work and thanks for your comments.

Danesh Morgan
Date: 9/6/2013 8:25:00 PM

thank you wayland

Karen Anglesey

Date: 9/2/2013 7:21:00 PM

I figured out why I am drawn to your poetry. Great sense of poetic conflict always a buzz for a reader like me... Really like your style :)

Danesh Morgan
Date: 9/2/2013 8:59:00 PM

wrote this a long time ago without any idea what i was writing i was 15yrs i think so what does a teen think at that age? thanks Karen

Kelly Deschler

Date: 8/29/2013 3:06:00 PM

Very nice piece of poetry you've written here! I really enjoyed reading this one!

Danesh Morgan
Date: 8/29/2013 4:20:00 PM

glad you like it Miss Kelly thanks

Marquis Mc Mills-Cooper

Date: 8/29/2013 12:58:00 PM

Good poem DM! I like the contrast of Magic vs. Logic. Two great forces to write about indeed! MC

Danesh Morgan
Date: 8/29/2013 4:21:00 PM

indeed mc and when i wrote it first i had no idea it was going to turn out this way. . . lols thanks buddy. dm