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In a Wine Bottle

They hate his drinking -
       But they put his ashes in …
A wine bottle urn.


7/21/14

bereavementdeathfamilyfuneralhumorsenryu

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Poet Destroyer A

August 24, 2014 at 11:53 AM

Hija:) Thank you for the nice reply on my comment <3 LINDA

Dr.Ram Mehta

August 21, 2014 at 5:03 AM

Congrats on the win for this creative write, Luna

Hija De La Luna

August 21, 2014 at 7:33 AM

Thanks, Dr. Ram!

Robert Lindley

August 20, 2014 at 10:05 PM

Congrats on your fine win!!!

Hija De La Luna

August 21, 2014 at 7:34 AM

Thanks, Robert!

Casarah Nance

August 20, 2014 at 9:35 PM

Oh yup, isn't it ironic. That would be a good one for my husband, he brews his own wine. I don't like it, but I respect his hobby. I enjoyed your senryu well done on your win Hija :)

Hija De La Luna

August 21, 2014 at 7:34 AM

Thanks, Casarah! God bless you :)

Andrea Dietrich

August 20, 2014 at 3:12 PM

I like this one a lot. But it makes sense!!

Tim Smith

August 20, 2014 at 9:39 AM

What a terrific piece and win.....Happy Birthday Hija....hugs Tim

Hija De La Luna

August 21, 2014 at 7:35 AM

Thanks, Tim! and for the greetings! :))

Poet Destroyer A

August 20, 2014 at 9:34 AM

Hija, Congratulations!!! Thank you for the awesome Bottled Up senryu. Stop by my latest blog, "You Sunk My "BATTLESHIP" :)" if you like. I enjoyed closing this contest. Always ~LINDA~

Hija De La Luna

August 21, 2014 at 7:37 AM

Thanks, Linda! it is an honor to be appreciated by you :) God bless