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In a Wine Bottle

They hate his drinking -
       But they put his ashes in …
A wine bottle urn.


7/21/14

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/24/2014 11:53:00 AM

Hija:) Thank you for the nice reply on my comment <3 LINDA

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 8/21/2014 5:03:00 AM

Congrats on the win for this creative write, Luna

Hija De La Luna
Date: 8/21/2014 7:33:00 AM

Thanks, Dr. Ram!

Robert Lindley

Date: 8/20/2014 10:05:00 PM

Congrats on your fine win!!!

Hija De La Luna
Date: 8/21/2014 7:34:00 AM

Thanks, Robert!

Casarah Nance

Date: 8/20/2014 9:35:00 PM

Oh yup, isn't it ironic. That would be a good one for my husband, he brews his own wine. I don't like it, but I respect his hobby. I enjoyed your senryu well done on your win Hija :)

Hija De La Luna
Date: 8/21/2014 7:34:00 AM

Thanks, Casarah! God bless you :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/20/2014 3:12:00 PM

I like this one a lot. But it makes sense!!

Tim Smith

Date: 8/20/2014 9:39:00 AM

What a terrific piece and win.....Happy Birthday Hija....hugs Tim

Hija De La Luna
Date: 8/21/2014 7:35:00 AM

Thanks, Tim! and for the greetings! :))

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/20/2014 9:34:00 AM

Hija, Congratulations!!! Thank you for the awesome Bottled Up senryu. Stop by my latest blog, "You Sunk My "BATTLESHIP" :)" if you like. I enjoyed closing this contest. Always ~LINDA~

Hija De La Luna
Date: 8/21/2014 7:37:00 AM

Thanks, Linda! it is an honor to be appreciated by you :) God bless