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They hate his drinking - But they put his ashes in … A wine bottle urn. 7/21/14

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Date: 8/24/2014 11:53:00 AM
Hija:) Thank you for the nice reply on my comment <3 LINDA
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Date: 8/21/2014 5:03:00 AM
Congrats on the win for this creative write, Luna
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hija de la luna
Date: 8/21/2014 7:33:00 AM
Thanks, Dr. Ram!
Date: 8/20/2014 10:05:00 PM
Congrats on your fine win!!!
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hija de la luna
Date: 8/21/2014 7:34:00 AM
Thanks, Robert!
Date: 8/20/2014 9:35:00 PM
Oh yup, isn't it ironic. That would be a good one for my husband, he brews his own wine. I don't like it, but I respect his hobby. I enjoyed your senryu well done on your win Hija :)
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Date: 8/21/2014 7:34:00 AM
Thanks, Casarah! God bless you :)
Date: 8/20/2014 3:12:00 PM
I like this one a lot. But it makes sense!!
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Date: 8/20/2014 9:39:00 AM
What a terrific piece and win.....Happy Birthday Hija....hugs Tim
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Date: 8/21/2014 7:35:00 AM
Thanks, Tim! and for the greetings! :))
Date: 8/20/2014 9:34:00 AM
Hija, Congratulations!!! Thank you for the awesome Bottled Up senryu. Stop by my latest blog, "You Sunk My "BATTLESHIP" :)" if you like. I enjoyed closing this contest. Always ~LINDA~
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Date: 8/21/2014 7:37:00 AM
Thanks, Linda! it is an honor to be appreciated by you :) God bless
Date: 8/17/2014 9:22:00 PM
Witty, and ironic!!!
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hija de la luna
Date: 8/18/2014 12:57:00 AM
thanks, arthur!!
Date: 7/21/2014 5:13:00 PM
It was so apropos!! I love this kind of haiku that cleverly captures irony of a situation.
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hija de la luna
Date: 7/22/2014 7:01:00 AM
Thanks, Andrea! treasure your words! :)
Date: 7/21/2014 11:29:00 AM
Gotta love this Senryu. All the ingredients, mixed, stirred, and served over ice.
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Date: 7/22/2014 7:04:00 AM
thanks, John! seems like you had a good drink with this!:)