In a Whisper

The winds whisper stories through the 
pines, and as the scent of evergreen and 
fallen leaves waken our noses, we climb.
With beautiful views of a lake far below, 
we become entangled in a story we do not know. 
We ascend farther into the dark 
and shadowed wood that now 
surrounds us, our ears abruptly filled 
with the  sound of rushing water, we 
emerge and are witness to the 
most beautiful sight we have ever seen, 
water appears as if out of nowhere 
and falls for what seems forever crashing 
over rocks, creating white pockets of foam 
and spirals of deep blue.   Yes, the winds do
whispers stories through the pines, 
watching, listening as our lives go by.





© 2010 Charles Dennis


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Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Loving Iii Avatar
November 4, 2010 at 2:06 PM
God is great.
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November 4, 2010 at 10:51 AM
This is beautiful Charles.Your description so vivid, your words come alive and I can see it as if I was at the scene myself.It's so idyllic.I love it.Thank you for sharing it.Love June(sylvia)
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