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In a whirlwind

Elijah was caught up to heaven in a whirlwind. Just prior to that Elisha asked for and received a double portion of his spirit

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Date: 5/12/2015 12:43:00 PM
THIS IS A LONG HAIKU.... LIFE IS A SWIRL...SKAT
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Date: 5/28/2014 3:47:00 AM
Lovely micropoetry.. Maybe you might want to check on the poetry form haiku... re syllable count.. . Anyway - I do LIKE the imagery... VERY much.. Hope you don't mind the honesty of a part of my comment. Dutch Greetings Elly
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Jacqueline R. Mendoza
Date: 5/28/2014 11:09:00 PM
Oh, I just read it from a Catholic quiz so I'm not very good in syllable count, I just write.
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Jacqueline R. Mendoza
Date: 5/28/2014 11:03:00 PM
Oh no, I need that thank you, I know what you're saying did I not put Haiku? Maybe because I'm very busy, thank you for your Constructive Criticism.