Premiere Contest WinnerIn a Tower Far Away

I wonder often what you think, or if you think at all,
of the time we shared together as the summer turned to fall.
I dream of your adventures, while I watch the passing day,
in a room of empty chairs, in a tower far away.

I wonder often what you know, of love that I cannot.
What lessons can you claim that wordless must be taught?
And even now I fantasize of games you surely play,
in a room of empty chairs, in a tower far away.

I wonder often what you felt, or did your heart not speak?
The power 'pon your lips made me strong and made me weak.
And even could I run to you, I think that I would stay,
in a room of empty chairs, in a tower far away.

The pain and loss are fading, my heart's more red than gray,
and soon your voice will echo, in memories far away. 

Written in Sarkey's Energy Center for "Let It Be" contest, sponsored by Catie Lindsey
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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O.J. Hunt Avatar
January 26, 2018 at 2:16 PM
Heartfelt and sincere, a seamless write;-)
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January 31, 2018 at 8:16 PM
Thank you!
Allison Avatar
August 28, 2017 at 11:50 AM
FLOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO welcome back!!! A hauntingly beautiful sad sonnet and I love the impact of the repeated phrase:-) I've got a huge smile on my face for you and for the soupers to see you return:-) hugs jan xx
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August 28, 2017 at 8:47 PM
Well, thanks for the compliments, but I'm afraid I'm not Flo ... I thought that was just a typo below and didn't bother to correct it! I hope Flo returns, though. Sounds like a well missed poet!
Dietrich Avatar
August 26, 2017 at 6:13 PM
A sad one in this contest theme of "Let It Be." BIG congratulations for your win.
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August 26, 2017 at 11:35 PM
Thank you!
Roper Avatar
August 25, 2017 at 9:10 AM
Beautiful poem,Flo, congratulations on your win ~*
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August 25, 2017 at 1:49 PM
Thank you!
Harris Avatar
August 25, 2017 at 8:29 AM
Congratulations on winning the Let It Be contest! The feeling of loneliness is superbly captured.
F. Avatar
August 25, 2017 at 1:48 PM
Thanks; I enjoyed the practical wisdom of your poem.
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