Alexis Y. Poet Tetractys

In a State of Sorrow - Tet

Joy
                     Has turned
                      To sorrow
               When you left me
 Love no longer lives in my heart, it died

Grief, loneliness and sadness comforts me
              Why did you leave?
                     I miss you
                        Darling
                          Bye




4-26-19

Contest: Tetractys This 
Sponsor: Charles Messina

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Eve Roper May 7, 2019 at 3:57 PM Congratulations on your Tetractys form win. Hugs eve

Andrea Dietrich May 4, 2019 at 2:19 PM Congratulations on your win, Alexis.

Janice Canerdy May 4, 2019 at 9:47 AM Alexis, CONGRATS on your well-deserved win! Janice

Tom Cunningham May 4, 2019 at 9:38 AM Back with congratulations on.your top win. Tom

Winged Warrior May 4, 2019 at 9:04 AM Congrats!!! dear Alexis...excellent entry my friend...Charlieku must be proud of all of us lol...happy endings...^WW^...{*J*}

Anne-Lise Andresen May 4, 2019 at 8:32 AM - Congratulations, Alexis :) - Happy weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Joseph May May 4, 2019 at 8:03 AM Congrats on your win Alexis with this sad write Alexis...

Charles Messina May 4, 2019 at 6:58 AM So sad, but so well done Alexis. Congratulations on your win Hugs Charlie Alexis Y. May 4, 2019 at 8:06 AM Hi Charlie, You host good contest. I appreciate my win in your contests:-) Alexis

Gershon Wolf April 29, 2019 at 7:00 PM I like the way you eased up on the intensity pedal in the second stanza and just let the goodbye float off. Nicely done, Alexis! Best wishes, Gershon

Silent One April 29, 2019 at 2:24 PM You did this very well..

Jennifer Proxenos April 28, 2019 at 11:20 AM Hi Alexis - this is certainly up for a win! Your sad poems are very sad my friend and written with genuine sincerity! Hugs, Jenny.

Jan Allison April 28, 2019 at 5:26 AM aww such sad lines Alexis and unfortunately one many can relate to:-( hugs jan xx

Paul Callus April 26, 2019 at 3:16 PM Goodbye to love and joy, Alexis! Your words have crossed the bridge of no return. Regards // paul

Heidi Sands April 26, 2019 at 7:44 AM Well written Alexis. I can feel it. Have a nice day :)

Tom Cunningham April 26, 2019 at 6:49 AM A sad verse Alexis, welcome back. Good luck. Tom. Have soupmailed you.

Anne-Lise Andresen April 26, 2019 at 5:55 AM - A beautiful but sad writing, Alexis - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)