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In a Spin

oh prunus spinosa you are my delight oh prunus spinosa flowering so white to see this thorn maturing in the autumn hue makes my heart want to sing so full of fruit, deep blue but there is this bitter taste is there something you can do it would seem such a waste what if you merge into a brew oh prunus spinosa you are my delight oh prunus spinosa flowering so white freezing you to release your juice sweetened and you're almost there soon to become a new produce regularly revolved with loving care leave you now to father time no tonic needed to begin this time you'll taste sublime just sip what was once in a spin oh prunus spinosa you are my delight oh prunus spinosa flowering so white Created May 16, 2023 Joe Bonamassa inspiration 4 Song "Sloe Gin" Contest sponsor Robert James Liquori

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Date: 5/18/2023 6:20:00 AM
"oh prunus spinosa you are my delight oh prunus spinosa flowering so white" - Great chorus. Beautifully written. Congratulations!
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Date: 5/18/2023 9:49:00 AM
Thanks for taking time to comment. Appreciate it LL
Date: 5/17/2023 2:33:00 AM
LL, congratulations on your win in the contest with this wonderful poem, I will have to check out that song !
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Date: 5/17/2023 3:00:00 AM
Thanks for your read and feed. I would have thought I would be gold in a liquori contest :) re the song, its quite the other end of the beverage cycle :) cheers LL

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