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In a Silent Way

Sustained in dulcet fugue blue waters converge inside moments of mountains imbued with silent springs Pouring illusive champagne dreams rainbow arches that impale the softness it sings bubbling pale perfect birdsweet nectars Daylight confronts entering the city rhythms of NOW running to the urgency emergency lights flash into night beats of congruous conflict Away NOW stay vending peace inside moments of mountains where blue waters I disappear In honeyed silence July 16, 2023

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Sam Kauffman

Date: 7/24/2023 10:37:00 AM

Lonna, congratulations on your win! Your phrasing is as unique as the fusion of sounds in this music. "Daylight confronts entering the city" just one of the stunning images painting a pure picture of the flowing music. So happy to see this on the winners list! Blessings to you.